Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 40)

01 Jul

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Part 40

The blast of so many balloons that too in that pitch darkness made Natasha jumped up in fear. And then all of them said all together


Happy Birthday Natasha Aunty


Exactly at 12, they all screamed together and then the light turned on and all of them stood in front of her. 


Natasha looked around the room and then saw all the kids were standing in front of her while grinning widely. Daadi ma came towards her and hugged her,


Daadi ma: Happy birthday beta, wishing you all the happiness of the world


Natasha: maa ye sab kab aur kisne


Daadi ma: sab baccho ki taraf se aap ki liye chota sa surprise, aur aab aap hi sochiye kiska plan hai ye


Natasha looked around and asked for maan, who already disappeared to come up with his own gift


Natasha: maan kaha hai?


And then and lights again disappeared except from the candles. The hall filled with the golden rays of the hundreds of candles.


A spot light fall on Natasha and a voice made her smile wholeheartedly.


Happy Birthday Mom, you know I’m very bad in sharing my feelings in word when it comes about expressing anything. Still I just thought to try a lil bit today


I still remember mom, the days when u used to teach me how to write my own name. Then I used to run away here and there & make ur work difficult. Still you never gave up and here today I’m the Maan, made by you. You gave me the hope and reason to live my life. You never let me realize any trouble and always fought with dad for my every single demand.


Maan looked at his mother and saw her eyes were tearful with a smile playing in her face.


From the very 1st day till now, u are always there with me as im a one year old kid needing you all the time beside me. I just want to tell you that I would never ever grow old enough to find my socks, my belt and you will be my outfit-for �the-occasion designer.


All laughed at his comment. And maan cleared his throat to continue.


I felt like an alien when I realized that I’ve not said all this to you already. You’re just the best I could ever have. And I really want to say thnx to the almighty for sending me to this place as your son. And yes officially I’m declaring that you are the super mom of the world. Happy birthday mom and here the song is for you.

(most of the lines are copied from google chachu)


Maan came out from the darkness with a guitar in his hand. He came near his mother and said started the song.


You taught me everything 
And everything you’ve given me
I always keep it inside
you’re the driving force in my life, yeah 


Natasha smiled at her son’s words and tried to give an angry look for disturbing her all the time with a face that he didn’t remember his mom’s birthday. But all knew it’s just she was trying to make a face of angriness, she was not angry at all


There isn’t anything 
Or anyone that I can be
And it just wouldn’t feel right
If I didn’t have you by my side 


Maan said while giving her a sorry look to her

You were there for me to love and care for me
When skies were gray
Whenever I was down
You were always there to comfort me 


Maan said while slightly glancing towards his father, making all giggle as all knew he was mentioning all the times when his mother saved him from his father and let his dream won in front of his father’s wish

And no one else can be what you have been to me
You will always be
you always will be the girl
In my life for all times 


Maan said those words while bending in front of Natasha in a pose like he was asking the hand of the most beautiful girl of the world. To which Natasha slightly slapped him while smiling at him while her eyes were red, not in pain but in happiness, for getting the most perfect son of the world

Mama, mama you know I love you
Oh you know I love you
Mama, mama you’re the queen of my heart
Your love is like
Tears from the stars
Mama, I just want you to know
Lovin’ you is like food to my soul 


Maan sung while wiping away the tears from her mother’s eyes and side hug her

Yes it is, yes it is, oh
yes it is,
yes it is, yes it is, oh


Maan went near Adi and and adi joined him in the humming music

You’re always down for me
Have always been around for me even when I was bad
You showed me right from my wrong
Yes you did 


Maan sung those words while winking at Geet, which made geet startled. She was confused for whom he actually meant those words. Somewhere she was feeling it was for her but next moment,


(This pic is specially only for this story, no one can use it without my permission, or else i’m gonna report to the mod against the user Angry)


Hell no, as it’s for his mother, hai na babaji?


Geet thought to herself 

And you took up for me
When everyone was downin’ me
You always did understand
You gave me strength to go on 


Maan went towards Daadi ma and Natasha and gave a group hug by which he silently thanked the both ladies of his family for supporting him all the time.

There were so many times
Looking back when I was so afraid
And then you’d come to me
And say to me I could face anything 


Maan sung while taking blessings from his mother. And Natasha hugged her with so much happiness that the candles became dim in front of the glow of her face. 


Yes she is the happiest woman who had everything near him, a mother like mother in law, a perfect husband, and all the kids who did so much for her today. She was so much overwhelmed today 

And no one else can do
What you have done for me
You’ll always be
You will always be the girl in my life 

Maan again looked at geet and said those lines, this time Geet made an angry face and looked at other way

Never gonna go a day without you
Fills me up just thinking about you
I’ll never go a day without my mama Oh
You are the food to my soul
Yes you are

Maan said those words and ended the song , and all clapped together.


Maan: I love you mom


Natasha: I love you the most beta, im the luckiest mother to have you as my son


Natasha said while hugging her son


All came near Natasha to wish her. Ragini gave a gift pack to her, which Natasha took happily and gave her blessings with a thank you to her.


Geet bend down and took Natasha’s blessing and Natasha hugged her affectionately which made ragini irritated to realize that Geet was really close to Maan’s family and she actually never came to know that.


Geet: Happy birthday aunty


Natasha: thanx a lot beta, i can’t express how happy I am today. You all did so much for me


Pinky: hawww aunty, why wouldn’t we come? We are also your family na?


Natasha: off course beta, ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hui?


Replied Natasha while hugging Pinky as well






Natasha cut down the cake and feed all the kids first, then others. All had so much fun until 3am, and then all decided to have a break and continue in morning, and decided to return in their respective rooms for tonight.


Adi went back to his home while promised that he would be here for lunch as Natasha invited all for lunch treat from her side.


Ragini don’t want to stay in outhouse with geet and pinky, so she said to all that she is afraid of darkness and didn’t want to go back in outhouse now, so daadi ma took ragini in her room.


Geet and Pinky were going to their room in outhouse, when pinky stopped all of a sudden.


Geet: aab kya hua? chal na jaldi, im feeling sleepy pinky


Pinky: geet, you go ahead, I forgot to bring the door key from daadi ma, and I’m coming in 2 minutes


Geet: grrr, tu bhi na, jaldi aaja


Pinky went back while geet started to walk towards the outside while yawning


But before she could complete her yawn, one hand came from behind and closed her mouth, so that she could not able to shout, and in another hand clasped her tightly


Maan and Geet in Natasha’s Birthday Party


PRECAP: nehi dungi, I want a good amount of comments from you all before I will disclose the real dhamaka now LOL

next update only on 52 page. i really didn’t ask much, only 6 page, i don’t think i wrote that much boring that i can’t even get that much feed backs from u all.

wednessday i WANT TO update this again, so help me in doing so by posting ur comments please, it really motivates me a lot. or else i will update Toote hue Khwaab rather than this Angry






Posted by on July 1, 2013 in Sargoshiya-Whisper of Love


6 responses to “Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 40)

  1. nisha

    July 1, 2013 at 5:42 pm

    it was amazing dear. i loved it. maan is so smart. he is singing for his mother but he is also telling his feeling to geet. which was not recognized by geet.i am so exited for next. now what will be maan’s next act

    • Dipti Sam

      July 3, 2013 at 3:36 am

      thnx a lot for commenting 🙂

  2. Diya

    July 2, 2013 at 9:17 am

    Wow such a lovely update. . . . . Song was touchey bt lovely. Maan xpressed his love for his mom beautifully. I loved it. I m also confused maan meant those lines fr geet also or only for natasha. . .
    Ragini became angry seeing a good bonding between geet n khuranas hahaha. . . . . . . It was obviously maan who caught geet frm behind. . . . Hope will get some maaneet moments in next part.

    • Dipti Sam

      July 3, 2013 at 3:37 am

      who know’s its Maan or someone else 😉

  3. manas1234uas

    July 2, 2013 at 9:28 am

    awesome update….

  4. ushankitvc

    July 2, 2013 at 4:31 pm

    awesum updt…loved the song….continue sooon….


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