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Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 47)

23 Sep

Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner… its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 
 
Part 47
 

 

Anukalp: accha? Maan what were you talking?

 

Daadi ma: son I will talk with you about that, now you complete your breakfast and go to office

 

Anukalp: that means something very urgent is cooking on my son’s brain, mai bhi to sunu?

 

Maan: dad can we talk now? if you have time

 

Maan asked his dad, making the others shocked. Previously its Daadi ma and his mom, who used to save him and post all his demand in front of his dad, now from when  Maan became so sincere?

 

Anukalp frowned to see his son talking to sincerely with him,

 

Anukalp: I do have time for my family, but let’s hope you didn’t do anything wrong

 

Maan: no dad, it’s something else, ermmm something serious, really

 

Just then Anukalp’s the phone rang and his secretary reminded him about his meeting

 

Anukalp: yes I’m coming, just complete all the printing, so that everything will be on place when I will enter for the meeting

 

After cutting the call, Anukalp looked at Maan

 

Anukalp: come to my study

 

Maan: its ok dad, you go, we can talk at night

 

Anukalp: no problem lets go and talk in study

 

Maan: no dad, it will take much time and you will get late, we will talk at night

 

Anukalp: you sure? Everything ok na son?

 

Maan: yes dad, it’s just I want to share something important with you, but its not that urgent and can wait till night

 

Anukalp: ok, we will talk at night, bye now

 

Saying so Anukalp started to go towards the exits, while Maan’s mom following him to bid good bye. Near the door Anukalp stopped and turned towards Maan

 

Anukalp: if its anything urgent, give me a call, I will come home, or you can come to the office anytime, ok?

 

Maan: yes dad

 

Maan smiled at his dad. No matter how much he tried to wear the angry man mask, somewhere deep within he has a very soft corner just for his family with a determination to safe his family from all bad deeds. May be that’s why daadi ma never get afraid of his anger. Or mom always talk calmly in between their dad and son fight, cause somewhere all know that his dad is worried for his bright career, nothing else.

 

His chain of thoughts broke when Daadi ma poked him on his shoulder

 

Maan: you want something daadi?

 

Daadi ma: when are you going to meet her with us?

 

Maan: meet whom?

 

Daadi ma: with Geet you fool

 

Maan: now what type of question is this daadi ma? you are asking like you don’t know who she is and how she looks like. You all already know her, right?

 

Natasha: yes but officially as Khurana Bahu you need to bring her, right? Or you don’t want our blessings?

 

Natasha asked from behind,

 

Daadi ma: waise tomorrow she is going back in delhi na?

 

Maan: yes daadi

 

Maan replied making a sad face

 

Natasha: arree, then when are you planning to bring her here? accha wait, bring her today

 

Maan: today? But she wants to go for the shopping again

 

Natasha: haan, then go for shopping now, and let’s have the dinner together, you know family dinner?

 

Maan: but dad

 

Daadi ma: first let him join the dinner, then you mom will talk with him seperately, I’m sure he likes geet

 

Daadi ma said while patting his cheek making maan grin from ear to ear

 

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In hostel waiting room:

 

Maan was waiting for Geet from checking his watch in every 5 minutes. Finally after half hour he saw Geet running towards him in his normal t shirt and jeans

 

Maan: oh god, I told her to be ready in something formal and here madam is in jeans, what will I do with her?

 

When Geet came a little near him, Maan asked her,

 

Maan: what took you so much time geet? And why are you not ready yet?

 

But geet didn’t stop. She came running towards him and hugged him tightly.

 

Maan: wow, what a good welcome by my love

 

Maan joked but stopped in mid when he heard Geet sniffing

 

Maan: Geet, what happened? Geet, is everything ok?

 

Maan tried to come out of the hug but Geet just tightened her arms around him, and cried more hiding her face in his neck

 

Maan hugged her back when he guessed she is not going to stop so soon. He cocooned her in his arms and started to tell soothing words to make her calm. After some time Geet broke the hug , while Maan became more worried to see her red eyes.

 

Maan: geet, what

 

Geet: papa’s here

 

Maan: what? Where?

 

Geet: in my room Maan. He came to surprise me, and he’s taking me to Delhi, tonight

 

Maan: but you were supposed to go tomorrow

 

Geet: Maan, tomorrow bro’s office boss coming with his son

 

Maan felt like someone stabbed him with a sharp knife.

 

Maan: but when all these took part? You never said me that

 

Geet: I didn’t know, I never knew why they were telling me to come as soon as possible, I thought they were missing me

 

Geet cried more while telling that

 

Maan: but

 

Maan couldn’t complete his words, when someone places one hand on his shoulder and turned him in a jerk, making both of them startled

 

What are you doing here? Why are you here with my daughter?

 

Geet: papa main

 

But Mohindar stopped her in middle

 

Mohindar: You said you need to return notes to your friends? Where are the notes Geet? And is this your friend?

 

Geet: Papa, papa maan

 

Mohindar: I know he’s Maan, I do know him. ? He was in my house, did you forgot?

 

Maan: Uncle I

 

Mohindar: yes, I know you, no need to introduce yourself. I know you are not Maan Sharma at all. But you are the famous singer MSK, am I right Sir?

 

Geet: papa, he was going to tell

 

Mohindar: geet go and pack your bags

 

But geet kept looking at his father’s angry face. Never in her life, she saw her papa in this much anger

 

Mohindar: didn’t you hear what I said? Go right now. I will not repeat my words again

 

Maan: at least let me explain please. I really didn’t

 

Before Maan could complete his sentence, a loud sound echoed the room and Geet saw widely at Maan’s face, where a red hand mark was visible just within 5 seconds of the slap

 

END OF PART 47

 

Chalo chalo, ye part khatam, aur mood nehi hai aaj likhne ka

 

Next part after 8 pages with at least 80 likes. Sam too wants to complete the rona dhona parts soon 

 

Precap:

Maan’s family vs Geet’s Family

Anukalp and Mohindar = Angry

Daadi ma and Arjun= in explanation

Natasha and Ria= helpless

Maan and Geet = well you need to fulfill the quota to know

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2 Comments

Posted by on September 23, 2013 in Sargoshiya-Whisper of Love

 

2 responses to “Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 47)

  1. Simran kaur

    September 23, 2013 at 2:51 pm

    Ahhhhhh…… kaha pe end ki bechare maaneet phas gayeee uffff angry fathers waiting for nxt yrrrr

     
  2. ushankitvc

    September 25, 2013 at 4:26 pm

    OMG!!!!maans family agreed but mohinder?????what will happen now???continue sooon

     

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