Sargoshiya- Whisper of Love Part 62 (Last Part)

26 Jun


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I just wanna THNX each of the reader of Sargoshiyan. You guys really helped a lot in my very first journey in writing world.
I was actually upset while writing the last part and it took me a lot of time to write, sam was indeed emotional this time Cry

I tried to go throw the Hinduism marriage rituals and wrote this part. If I wrote anything wrong, don’t take it in heart as I myself is a Muslim girl so don’t have any slightest knowledge about ur’s culture apart from the info from Wikipedia
And the 18+ is written by my fluffy pie as I’m kinda boring and unromantic girl. So love you babu for the help

Last Part

Maan was talking with his friends, when Natasha came towards him

Natasha: Maan, come on. It’s time now

Ria and Arjun came as well, and the y all together went towards the stage.

Maan could feel something deep inside him. A feel that today he got the biggest happiness of his life.

He smiled suddenly at his thoughts, just before one year ago, he was the one who used to believe in love, but in a different way. For him love is existed in this world, but the word love is not always about the feelings between a boy and a girl.

He used to think that his love was his music, he used to think that he was deeply in love with his music as music was his passion.

But now he knew the real song and love of his life will come with a name as Geet. His geet. His real song of life

His chain of thoughts broke with the whistles and sounds.

Maan looked at the stair, and as soon as his eyes went towards his jaan, he forgot to breath.

There she was, walking towards him, ready to be his wife, ready to be with him completely to be his better half

But for Maan, she has full right on his life, not bounded with the word called better half

Geet can feel the burning gaze on her and became shyer as she knew her pucchu was looking at her right now.

Both stood in front of each other for exchanging the flowers.

Both took the varmala in their hands.

As soon as Geet was about to put the varmala on Maan, all Maan’s friends pulled him higher so that Geet couldn’t able to put the varmala.

Geet made a cute frown face and looked at Maan in her jhoota gussa.

Geet: Pucchu mai chala jaunga bol raha hoon. Shaadi kar na hai k nehi?

Maan: aree mai kya kia Jaan, sab to unn log karraha hai

Geet: to jaldi niche aao, warna mai gaya

Maan hurriedly bend his head in front of Geet to help Geet and Geet smiled wide while putting the varmala

Adi: kya Maan. You are going to bow down your head in front Geet after your marriage.

Arjun: Chalta hai. It is also called as making peace agreement with your wife. Just look at me

Ria glared at him and all laughed

Maan to wear Geet varmala easily as Geet didn’t let anyone disturb in her marriage rituals, so no one could able to pull her up.

Daadi ma: chalo one work is done. This varmala exchange is the proof that you both accepted each other and will love and live together with one and other.

Ria: Haan now stop pulling wach other’s legs and Geet abhi se you are gving him threats?

Mohindar: we should complete the phere, warna muhurat nikal jayega

Both sat together in front of the holy fire. Ria came and put the red decorated dupatta on Geet’s head, whereas Natasha helped Maan to put his sehra

Pandit ji called girl’s father for Kanyadaan. Mohindar put a ring on Maan’s finger and the he gave Geet’s hand in Maan’s hand

After the Kanyadaan the pheres began. Both of them stood up in front of the sacred fire. They took their seven pheres and promised to themselves that they will be each other’s strength and will never leave one another till their last breath.

After the pheres Maan applied vermillion (sindoor) in Geet’s hair partition and tied the beaded necklace (mangalsutra) To Geet’s neck.

Both took blessings from the elders as the Pandit declared them as husband and wife.



(Maaneet Wedding Rituals edited by me. Feel free to use them if u guys like it, just don’t crop my name out LOL)


Adi: areee how can it possible, you guys just robbed 50 lakhs and now asking for more

Pinky: haan to, what’s your problem? You are not the groom right?

Adi: no ways I’m going to be a duffer like Maan

Pari: then shut your mouth and tell us talk with our official jiju

Rahul: dekho its too much yaar. Give back the shoes. They need to leave for dinner

Geet: haan pinky de dena. We need to leave for Mumbai also.

Pinky: achha? Bari jaldi hai?

Natasha: accha ek min, it’s another shagun so they have right

Maan: but mom they already bankrupted me

Pinky: hawww, biwi mili to saali buri? Chi jiju

Maan: jiju ki bacchi, return my shoes right now

Daadi ma came forward and handled them kalecharis of gold.

Natasha: we didn’t take any silver one, as I think you all are like Geet’s sisters. And in today’s generation I don’t think we should divide sisters and cousins in these matters.

They were too happy in natasha’s words and returned his shoes.

After the dinner, when it was time for bidaai, it was most touching moment. Maan was feeling helpless to see her crying, whereas Ria couldn’t able to control her tears anymore. She hugged Geet tight and both cried hugging each other.

Natasha had to come forward along with Daadi ma to take Geet towards the car. Of course after assuring them they are not taking a bride but a daughter and Geet will come here whenever she wished to come.


Finally after the long tiring travel and completing many more rituals Maan sighed and was about to enter in his room, when daadi ma stopped him in middle

Maan: now what Daadi? let me get inside now. I’m tired

Daadi ma: but beta, you have to wait some more few hours

Maan: oyee hello, I’m tired, please let me sleep daadi. Do whatever you want, but in morning

Daadi ma: accha? Then do one thing beta, you come to my room and sleep tonight. Now your mother is talking with Geet inside. You will not be able to rest

Maan came near his daadi ma and whispered

Maan: Daadi ma at least aap to samjho mere Baato ko

Daadi: I can understand beta. That’s why telling you to come and sleep with me tonight

Daadi said sincerely while trying hard to control her laugh

Maan looked at his Daadi and can understand she’s just pulling his legs

Maan: im going to move away and will rent one room flat for mine and geet. Dekh lena

Daadi ma: Accha? But Geet will not leave us

Natasha: kya maa ji, leave him now.

Maan: mom you are here, then who’s inside?

Natasha: Maan what type of question is this? Of course Geet

Maan: but Daadi was telling

Natasha: don’t listen to her. You go inside. And maa ji, you come with me

Saying so Natasha pulled Daadi ma with her and Maan hurriedly entered inside and locked the door before any more disaster came behind him

He looked at his bride, sitting on that decorated bed.

He slowly sit on the bed, near her, and pulled the ghunghat letting him watch her angelic face

Maan keep ogling at her with his big eyes as she was looking not less than an angel in her wedding dress

Geet: Maan, stop staring like that

Maan: my love, my wife, my life, who’s going to stop me. let me see you jaan. I couldn’t able to do that down there

Geet: But its feeling like you are looking at some fruit and going to eat me

Maan: i may eat you raw tonight

Geet: Then do something na? It’s almost half hour now we are sitting in same position. I’m feeling sleepy.  and i will throw you out of the room if you don’t make this night romantic and make me sleepy

Geet threatened making Maan white in horror

Seeing Maan’s white face Geet narrowed her eyes, then held his collar in her fist bringing him closer to her face, they were mere inches apart and Maan was just staring at the bold but cute as hell Geet. She greeted her teeth.

Geet: If you don’t do anything Maan I swear I will make u sleep outside this room and I,,,

Her words died as his hand slipped on her waist bringing her close in one swift moment. Her breaths labored as their face were inches apart.

18+ (read at your own risk Blushing)

One moment and her lips will touch Maan. Her lips parted in a small gasp as Maan’s hand roamed on her back rubbing the flesh and heat surge through their body.

Sensation crawl her vein as his breath fall on her lips. A moan worked from somewhere of her.


In that moment their lips met but Maan didn’t deepen it waiting for her. She didn’t disappoint him as her lips parted. Maan ran his tongue on her plump lower lips then outlined inside if her upper lips.

Nails dug in his flesh which made him restless for her, with a groan Maan pulled her closer sealing their lips and entering the sweet heaven.

Both sighed in the kiss, their hand were all over each other, Geet’s hand were on Maan’s nape pulling his hair and massaging his nape which made the kiss erotic.

He was getting hard with each strokes from her lips and was making him wild maybe that’s what she wanted.. His teeth ravaged his thirst for her lips and when he left her her lips were red and swollen.

Her shy face with the natural red lips made his desire fire tenfold. Seeing the hungry gaze a naughty smile came on her and she pushed him, then gave her back towards him.

Before she can leave the bed Maan held thread of her blouse which made Geet’s eyes widen and a gasp broke out. Her breath hitch as he lowered his lips on her velvety flesh, his warm breath made it difficult to think straight and Maan knew it. Geet arched her back as he placed his warm lips in between her shoulder blade.

He started placing wet kisses n her spine which earned more moans from her. Maan’s lips were trailing down and she was shivering with sensation that was flowing in her vein. Not knowing what to do and how to hold her own self intact while he was setting person fire, she just turned and hugged Maan with her all strength.

Her breath never lowered and the tiny sensation between her legs never subsided. She just held him closer to her not bothering about her blouse that was hanging from her shoulder.

Maan broke the hug holding her chin and forcing her to meet his eyes but she refused by closing her eyes.

Maan: Open your eyes Geet.

Shaking her head she smiled

Maan kissed the corner of her mouth. Then his voice dropped in a husky note. You don’t know how much desirable and sexy u r looking right now. After this night I won’t be able to leave u for a second.

Geet opened her eyes: I don’t want u to leave me even for a blink of eyes.

Maan again kissed the corner of her mouth but this time he trailed a line of wet kisses from her cheeks to the joint of her shoulder. Her toes curled as he sucked her flesh, the sensitive area of her neck and behind her ear making her mad with desire.

Maan’s lips came down on her bosom and with care he took out the piece of cloth. His breath ragged seeing the perfect creamy glove. Geet bite her lips then tried to hide her half nude body but he held her wrist then shook his head.

Maan: You are perfect. Beautiful..

In one second his sherwani touched the ground and Maan kissed her again more carnal. Her back touched the soft mattress as he came above her. His fingers found her find bud twitching slightly earning a cry of pleasure from her, his hand held them while his lips sucked her lips.

She twitched and jerked under his hand. Leaving her lips Maan touched her one globe, teasing with his tongue and wetting then taking in his mouth and sucking harder. Her moans filled the room as he gave same attention to the other globe.

Her nails scratched his half nude body, her fingers touched his bare back, Muscle rippled as her hand touched each bulge and it made him suck harder.

When their other cloth left their body they couldn’t said, it was all so blur. Geet pushed Maan on the mattress then with unsure hand exploded him.

Seeing Maan’s pleasure she became bolder and placed some wet kisses on his chest then coming down on scabs. Her tongue licked the salty sexy flesh.

His musky scent filled her nostrils. It wasn’t much before that Maan pinned her on the mattress coming above her. She knew what was coming and anticipation with little fear increased her excitement..

Their lips met again and Maan parted her thighs with his knees. He left her lips coming on her neck. Geet arched more to his lips, his lips traveled between her breast teasing the arching bud.

His hardness touched her folds earning a groan from Maan as his control was thinning. Her wetness was his undoing and her moans.

Geet: please Maan…

She wasn’t sure what she was begging for, he came on her face.

Maan: you trust me na?

Geet looked at his eyes pouring her all love kissed him. And in reply she just kissed him like never before.

A cry tore the kiss, as he sheathed himself inside her inch by inch Geet let out a small cry but the pleasure was much. Maan held himself inside her, waiting for her to adjust and she did.

In a very few second her pain subsided and she locked her ankle behind his back. Maan entered all the way in her in one moment.

She arched for more and he gave it to her, each stroke was so powerful but it didn’t hurt her, just fulfilled her more and more. She can feel the sensation building more stronger.

Her orgasm ripped a pleasurable cry from deep in her throat. Maan followed her with 2 more strokes.

Geet: I love u.

Maan: you are mine Geet. I love u too. He kissed her lips hand roamed their sweety body, pulling her on top of him. Geet rested her cheek on his chest smiling feeling shy.

They didn’t realized when sleep engulf them, Maan’s grip left left her waist and Geet never placed her head anywhere else than Maan’s chest.

NEXT: Epilogue Ouch Cry 


Posted by on June 26, 2014 in Sargoshiya-Whisper of Love


2 responses to “Sargoshiya- Whisper of Love Part 62 (Last Part)

  1. ushankitvc

    June 26, 2014 at 10:14 am

    beautiful story….beautiful ending….beautiful journey

  2. huma19912013

    July 2, 2014 at 8:21 pm

    Oh dadi is soooo naughty lol n maaneet hotttttt me blushing


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