Sargoshiya- Whisper of Love Part 62 (Last Part)

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I just wanna THNX each of the reader of Sargoshiyan. You guys really helped a lot in my very first journey in writing world.
I was actually upset while writing the last part and it took me a lot of time to write, sam was indeed emotional this time Cry

I tried to go throw the Hinduism marriage rituals and wrote this part. If I wrote anything wrong, don’t take it in heart as I myself is a Muslim girl so don’t have any slightest knowledge about ur’s culture apart from the info from Wikipedia
And the 18+ is written by my fluffy pie as I’m kinda boring and unromantic girl. So love you babu for the help

Last Part

Maan was talking with his friends, when Natasha came towards him

Natasha: Maan, come on. It’s time now

Ria and Arjun came as well, and the y all together went towards the stage.

Maan could feel something deep inside him. A feel that today he got the biggest happiness of his life.

He smiled suddenly at his thoughts, just before one year ago, he was the one who used to believe in love, but in a different way. For him love is existed in this world, but the word love is not always about the feelings between a boy and a girl.

He used to think that his love was his music, he used to think that he was deeply in love with his music as music was his passion.

But now he knew the real song and love of his life will come with a name as Geet. His geet. His real song of life

His chain of thoughts broke with the whistles and sounds.

Maan looked at the stair, and as soon as his eyes went towards his jaan, he forgot to breath.

There she was, walking towards him, ready to be his wife, ready to be with him completely to be his better half

But for Maan, she has full right on his life, not bounded with the word called better half

Geet can feel the burning gaze on her and became shyer as she knew her pucchu was looking at her right now.

Both stood in front of each other for exchanging the flowers.

Both took the varmala in their hands.

As soon as Geet was about to put the varmala on Maan, all Maan’s friends pulled him higher so that Geet couldn’t able to put the varmala.

Geet made a cute frown face and looked at Maan in her jhoota gussa.

Geet: Pucchu mai chala jaunga bol raha hoon. Shaadi kar na hai k nehi?

Maan: aree mai kya kia Jaan, sab to unn log karraha hai

Geet: to jaldi niche aao, warna mai gaya

Maan hurriedly bend his head in front of Geet to help Geet and Geet smiled wide while putting the varmala

Adi: kya Maan. You are going to bow down your head in front Geet after your marriage.

Arjun: Chalta hai. It is also called as making peace agreement with your wife. Just look at me

Ria glared at him and all laughed

Maan to wear Geet varmala easily as Geet didn’t let anyone disturb in her marriage rituals, so no one could able to pull her up.

Daadi ma: chalo one work is done. This varmala exchange is the proof that you both accepted each other and will love and live together with one and other.

Ria: Haan now stop pulling wach other’s legs and Geet abhi se you are gving him threats?

Mohindar: we should complete the phere, warna muhurat nikal jayega

Both sat together in front of the holy fire. Ria came and put the red decorated dupatta on Geet’s head, whereas Natasha helped Maan to put his sehra

Pandit ji called girl’s father for Kanyadaan. Mohindar put a ring on Maan’s finger and the he gave Geet’s hand in Maan’s hand

After the Kanyadaan the pheres began. Both of them stood up in front of the sacred fire. They took their seven pheres and promised to themselves that they will be each other’s strength and will never leave one another till their last breath.

After the pheres Maan applied vermillion (sindoor) in Geet’s hair partition and tied the beaded necklace (mangalsutra) To Geet’s neck.

Both took blessings from the elders as the Pandit declared them as husband and wife.

(Maaneet Wedding Rituals edited by me. Feel free to use them if u guys like it, just don’t crop my name out LOL)

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Adi: areee how can it possible, you guys just robbed 50 lakhs and now asking for more

Pinky: haan to, what’s your problem? You are not the groom right?

Adi: no ways I’m going to be a duffer like Maan

Pari: then shut your mouth and tell us talk with our official jiju

Rahul: dekho its too much yaar. Give back the shoes. They need to leave for dinner

Geet: haan pinky de dena. We need to leave for Mumbai also.

Pinky: achha? Bari jaldi hai?

Natasha: accha ek min, it’s another shagun so they have right

Maan: but mom they already bankrupted me

Pinky: hawww, biwi mili to saali buri? Chi jiju

Maan: jiju ki bacchi, return my shoes right now

Daadi ma came forward and handled them kalecharis of gold.

Natasha: we didn’t take any silver one, as I think you all are like Geet’s sisters. And in today’s generation I don’t think we should divide sisters and cousins in these matters.

They were too happy in natasha’s words and returned his shoes.

After the dinner, when it was time for bidaai, it was most touching moment. Maan was feeling helpless to see her crying, whereas Ria couldn’t able to control her tears anymore. She hugged Geet tight and both cried hugging each other.

Natasha had to come forward along with Daadi ma to take Geet towards the car. Of course after assuring them they are not taking a bride but a daughter and Geet will come here whenever she wished to come.

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Finally after the long tiring travel and completing many more rituals Maan sighed and was about to enter in his room, when daadi ma stopped him in middle

Maan: now what Daadi? let me get inside now. I’m tired

Daadi ma: but beta, you have to wait some more few hours

Maan: oyee hello, I’m tired, please let me sleep daadi. Do whatever you want, but in morning

Daadi ma: accha? Then do one thing beta, you come to my room and sleep tonight. Now your mother is talking with Geet inside. You will not be able to rest

Maan came near his daadi ma and whispered

Maan: Daadi ma at least aap to samjho mere Baato ko

Daadi: I can understand beta. That’s why telling you to come and sleep with me tonight

Daadi said sincerely while trying hard to control her laugh

Maan looked at his Daadi and can understand she’s just pulling his legs

Maan: im going to move away and will rent one room flat for mine and geet. Dekh lena

Daadi ma: Accha? But Geet will not leave us

Natasha: kya maa ji, leave him now.

Maan: mom you are here, then who’s inside?

Natasha: Maan what type of question is this? Of course Geet

Maan: but Daadi was telling

Natasha: don’t listen to her. You go inside. And maa ji, you come with me

Saying so Natasha pulled Daadi ma with her and Maan hurriedly entered inside and locked the door before any more disaster came behind him

He looked at his bride, sitting on that decorated bed.

He slowly sit on the bed, near her, and pulled the ghunghat letting him watch her angelic face

Maan keep ogling at her with his big eyes as she was looking not less than an angel in her wedding dress

Geet: Maan, stop staring like that

Maan: my love, my wife, my life, who’s going to stop me. let me see you jaan. I couldn’t able to do that down there

Geet: But its feeling like you are looking at some fruit and going to eat me

Maan: i may eat you raw tonight

Geet: Then do something na? It’s almost half hour now we are sitting in same position. I’m feeling sleepy.  and i will throw you out of the room if you don’t make this night romantic and make me sleepy

Geet threatened making Maan white in horror

Seeing Maan’s white face Geet narrowed her eyes, then held his collar in her fist bringing him closer to her face, they were mere inches apart and Maan was just staring at the bold but cute as hell Geet. She greeted her teeth.

Geet: If you don’t do anything Maan I swear I will make u sleep outside this room and I,,,

Her words died as his hand slipped on her waist bringing her close in one swift moment. Her breaths labored as their face were inches apart.

18+ (read at your own risk Blushing)

One moment and her lips will touch Maan. Her lips parted in a small gasp as Maan’s hand roamed on her back rubbing the flesh and heat surge through their body.

Sensation crawl her vein as his breath fall on her lips. A moan worked from somewhere of her.

‘Maan’

In that moment their lips met but Maan didn’t deepen it waiting for her. She didn’t disappoint him as her lips parted. Maan ran his tongue on her plump lower lips then outlined inside if her upper lips.

Nails dug in his flesh which made him restless for her, with a groan Maan pulled her closer sealing their lips and entering the sweet heaven.

Both sighed in the kiss, their hand were all over each other, Geet’s hand were on Maan’s nape pulling his hair and massaging his nape which made the kiss erotic.

He was getting hard with each strokes from her lips and was making him wild maybe that’s what she wanted.. His teeth ravaged his thirst for her lips and when he left her her lips were red and swollen.

Her shy face with the natural red lips made his desire fire tenfold. Seeing the hungry gaze a naughty smile came on her and she pushed him, then gave her back towards him.

Before she can leave the bed Maan held thread of her blouse which made Geet’s eyes widen and a gasp broke out. Her breath hitch as he lowered his lips on her velvety flesh, his warm breath made it difficult to think straight and Maan knew it. Geet arched her back as he placed his warm lips in between her shoulder blade.

He started placing wet kisses n her spine which earned more moans from her. Maan’s lips were trailing down and she was shivering with sensation that was flowing in her vein. Not knowing what to do and how to hold her own self intact while he was setting person fire, she just turned and hugged Maan with her all strength.

Her breath never lowered and the tiny sensation between her legs never subsided. She just held him closer to her not bothering about her blouse that was hanging from her shoulder.

Maan broke the hug holding her chin and forcing her to meet his eyes but she refused by closing her eyes.

Maan: Open your eyes Geet.

Shaking her head she smiled

Maan kissed the corner of her mouth. Then his voice dropped in a husky note. You don’t know how much desirable and sexy u r looking right now. After this night I won’t be able to leave u for a second.

Geet opened her eyes: I don’t want u to leave me even for a blink of eyes.

Maan again kissed the corner of her mouth but this time he trailed a line of wet kisses from her cheeks to the joint of her shoulder. Her toes curled as he sucked her flesh, the sensitive area of her neck and behind her ear making her mad with desire.

Maan’s lips came down on her bosom and with care he took out the piece of cloth. His breath ragged seeing the perfect creamy glove. Geet bite her lips then tried to hide her half nude body but he held her wrist then shook his head.

Maan: You are perfect. Beautiful..

In one second his sherwani touched the ground and Maan kissed her again more carnal. Her back touched the soft mattress as he came above her. His fingers found her find bud twitching slightly earning a cry of pleasure from her, his hand held them while his lips sucked her lips.

She twitched and jerked under his hand. Leaving her lips Maan touched her one globe, teasing with his tongue and wetting then taking in his mouth and sucking harder. Her moans filled the room as he gave same attention to the other globe.

Her nails scratched his half nude body, her fingers touched his bare back, Muscle rippled as her hand touched each bulge and it made him suck harder.

When their other cloth left their body they couldn’t said, it was all so blur. Geet pushed Maan on the mattress then with unsure hand exploded him.

Seeing Maan’s pleasure she became bolder and placed some wet kisses on his chest then coming down on scabs. Her tongue licked the salty sexy flesh.

His musky scent filled her nostrils. It wasn’t much before that Maan pinned her on the mattress coming above her. She knew what was coming and anticipation with little fear increased her excitement..

Their lips met again and Maan parted her thighs with his knees. He left her lips coming on her neck. Geet arched more to his lips, his lips traveled between her breast teasing the arching bud.

His hardness touched her folds earning a groan from Maan as his control was thinning. Her wetness was his undoing and her moans.

Geet: please Maan…

She wasn’t sure what she was begging for, he came on her face.

Maan: you trust me na?

Geet looked at his eyes pouring her all love kissed him. And in reply she just kissed him like never before.

A cry tore the kiss, as he sheathed himself inside her inch by inch Geet let out a small cry but the pleasure was much. Maan held himself inside her, waiting for her to adjust and she did.

In a very few second her pain subsided and she locked her ankle behind his back. Maan entered all the way in her in one moment.

She arched for more and he gave it to her, each stroke was so powerful but it didn’t hurt her, just fulfilled her more and more. She can feel the sensation building more stronger.

Her orgasm ripped a pleasurable cry from deep in her throat. Maan followed her with 2 more strokes.

Geet: I love u.

Maan: you are mine Geet. I love u too. He kissed her lips hand roamed their sweety body, pulling her on top of him. Geet rested her cheek on his chest smiling feeling shy.

They didn’t realized when sleep engulf them, Maan’s grip left left her waist and Geet never placed her head anywhere else than Maan’s chest.

NEXT: Epilogue Ouch Cry 

 

Sargoshiya- Whisper of Love Part 61

Big Hug Tanu for this Awesome Banner Hug
Part 61

Groom Side Story:

Maan knocked the door for third time and called his mom worriedly

Maan: mom how much more time. Please open the door right now

Natasha: Maan stop banging the door, and let me get dressed. I just need more five minutes.

Maan: you are saying the same thing for last two hours.

No replied come

Maan: come on mom, just open the door. Because of you I’m going to miss my own wedding

The door opened and Natasha came out with a frowned face.

Natasha: I can bet on it that you are the very first groom who’s knocking each and every one’s door and calling them in each minute to come out. Such a shameless impatient groom!

Maan: oh really? And you are the first mother in law who’s taking more time than the bride to get ready.

Natasha: so what? I need to look perfect on my son’s wedding

Maan: but it’s my wedding right? Not dad’s and yours

Natasha: Maan ki bacchi

Before Natasha could slap him he ran away laughing and replying

Maan: first let me get married mom, only then you can expect your grandchildren. But I think because of you this wedding is going to postpone for another 8 months.

Natasha shook her head at her son’s shameful remark and went inside to take her purse

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Bride Side Story:

Ria: Nakul kaka, did you check the dishes. Please do that before serving them. I just can’t trust blindly to these cooks

Nakul: ji betiyan. I’ve checked them all, and will recheck again. Now you should go and get ready.

Ria: yes I will. First let me just check Geetu

Ria knocked the door and went inside to see the ladies applying the last touch up on Geet’s face

As soon as Geet looked at Ria, she almost shrieked in surprise

Geet: Bhabhi you are going to stay like this?

Ria: I’m just going to get ready. I just came to check you out

Geet: Bhabhi they will come in any moment. You go and get ready please

Ria: haan baba. I just need to check papa first, and then the dishes are served properly or not. And then

Geet stood up and hugged Ria tightly

Geet: Bhai will check the outside. Papa will also get ready and come to me to show whether it’s fine or not. You first take a deep breath and calm down. Then go and get ready

Ria: okay, but you just don’t stress okay?

Geet: I will not, cause you all are here with me.

Geet came out of the hug and placed a small kiss on Ria’s cheek.

Ria: what was that for?

Ria asked in amusement

Geet: you know bhabhi, yesterday also I was sad to think that mumma will not be here with me today. But from morning, I’m not even missing her. Because I know God is way too kind to give me another mother in the name of my bhabhi.

Ria smiled at her words and hugged her tightly. The thought itself that from today her geetu is going to leave this house, is enough to make her feel lonely and alone.

Now Geet will not be here to get pampered by her, to come to her in mid night with a demand to sleep with her. Will not be here to hug her tightly and blabber each and everything in every evening.

Ria: I wish I could tell you not to leave us here and go in your in law’s house. But afraid it’s the way nature fixed the departure of a girl’s.

Geet: I will come back every week bhabhi. Maan promised you know?

Geet replied in a cracked voice.

The door opened and Pinky came inside

Pinky: ye lo, you guys are not even ready and crying like some small babies? Bhabhi go and get ready first, she’s still here, so you need to save some tears for later.

Painky joked and both wacked her in return.

Ria: you are looking like a fairy angel Geetu. Maan is going to faint before wedding

Geet grinned at her words

Pinky: waise Geet, you are supposed to shy like some bride Geet. Here you are grinning shamelessly

Geet: you want me to kick you out now? i can also do that

Ria: Geet don’t came out of the room unless me or your bhai will come. And Pinky go downstairs and wait for the groom side. Go

Geet: haan you go and get ready

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All came down hurriedly when they heard the music outside.

Arjun: Ria come quickly. They are already near the entrance

Ria: haan baba, I’m already here.

Ria came out with the Puja Thali.

Arjun and Mohindar came forward to welcome them all. While Mohindar and Anukalp hugged each other, Arjun and Adi helped Maan to come down from the horse.

All together came towards Ria, who was waiting for them. But Pinky, Pari and others together came in front making a bridge, in order to stop Maan for moving forward.

Pinky: areee jiju, why in so much hurry. At least wait to us to complete the transaction

Adi: accha? What kind of transaction can happen in the road?

Pari: are you going to be our jija ji? No right? Then stop talking

Adi looked at others for help while all laughed to see Adi’s reaction

Maan: accha tell me what you guys want now?

Pinky: okay, you need to pay to get inside

Arjun: areee first let him get inside na?

Pari: no ways bhaia. He needs to pay to enter into the house and marry our Geet

Mohindar was about to interrupt when Daadi ma stopped him

Daadi ma: let them enjoy beta. At least they should enjoy their side of plays

Adi: Now that’s good Daadi. You should help us and take our side, and you are supporting them

Natasha: now our daughter is way too precious na? So Maan need to pay just to see her.

All screamed in happiness to get more supports from the elders

Maan: okay okay now tell me how much I need to pay?

Pinky: well as our Geet is this much precious, we can ask for crores, but we can’t make you run away. So pay half of 1 crore.

Rahul: what? Are you guys are mad? You are asking for 50 lakhs just to enter into the house

Pinky: no no, you get us wrong. it’s just to get a glace of Geet as well.

Adi: but Maan can’t see Geet’s face before wedding now. So why to pay you guys?

Maan: okay no need to fight. Let me talk

Maan came forward and said something softly near pinky’s ear. Pinky grinned and put her hand forward and Maan placed a bundle of money in her palm. She then let him cut the red ribbon and enter inside.

Before going inside Maan looked upward, and saw Geet’s shadow. He can easily understand what’s she wearing, but as a reflection by the window glass.

He smiled and thought to himself, he can pay more than that just to see a glance of his jaan

Maan came near Ria, who smiled at him and did the aarti. Then he took blessing from Mohindar, Arjun and Ria.

Ria: you don’t need to do that Maan

Maan: but I wanted to bhabhi. Cause I know you are Geet’s mother. so I have to take your blessing as well.

Ria smiled at him and hug him saying, that’s what he can get and think as the blessing from Geet’s mother. Mohindar smiled proudly to get Maan for his gudiya

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Maan was sitting with his family, when Mohindar and Arjun came towards them.

Mohindar: everything is okay na? is anyone facing any problem?

Natasha: bhai saab, you please stop stressing. Please sit here and relax. Everything is perfect

Arjun: Maan, wo papa wanted to gift you something. So we actually bought a car for you.

Maan: what? Papa aap

Mohindar: nehi beta. Please don’t take is negatively. It’s just we wanted to gift you something and Arjun suggested about the car

Daadi ma: beta, why you are doing these extra expenses? You could have asked us before buying this?

Maan: papa, can I ask for something?

Mohindar: haan beta. Just tell me.

Maan: Can I ask you to consider me as your son just like Arjun bhaia? I don’t want to be a son in law for you. I want you to think me as your own son

Mohindar: you are my son

Maan: then why all these? Why these car, honeymoon ticket and all? Papa you already accepted me, forgave me for my wrong deed that I lied with you. And for me it’s more than enough that you agreed to give me my Geet. Now please don’t make me low in front of me by giving these things to me?

Arjun: but Maan it’s just a small gift

Maan: it can never be a gift bhaia. And trust me I can never think of taking them. I can never make myself ready to use car that my father in law provided me using all his years of savings. I just need all your blessing so that I can work harder and earn all the necessary things to provide Geet whatever she needs in her near future. Nothing else

Mohindar was about to something, but this time Anukalp interrupted,

Anukalp: you are way too kind to us to give us your gem. I know Geet is way too precious for all of you and by giving us Geet, you gave us the most important thing that we wanted.

Maan: please papa. I can’t take this. You just pray for me so that I can take care of Geet till my last breath. That is all I need from you all

Mohindar smiled at him and hug him in gratitude.

Precap: Marriage + SR

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 60)

 

I’m really very overhelmed to read each of ur cmnts n wishes for my recovery. really guys u all rock. after Sargoshiyan’s end i’m really going to miss u all 

This update is specially for Deepthi… Happy Birthday Year… 

 

 

Part 60

 

It was already evening. Geet was applying the last minute touch up and listening to all her friend’s gossips about what they will do against the groom’s side to pull Maan’s legs in sangeet.

 

Pinky: but I don’t think groom side’s people have zero plans for sangeet. They surely have some plans as well

 

Pari: well they can have, but they can’t at least dance like us girls, right?

 

Pari asked making all laugh.

 

Geet: guys, do whatever you want to with the boys, but please don’t disturb mom, dad or daadi ma, okay?

 

Suhana: oh ho, from now you are taking your in-law’s side, haan Geet?

 

Before Geet could answer all heard the music started in the downstairs of the party hall.

 

Pinky: I think they already reached

 

Ria entered into the room hurriedly.

 

Ria: what are you guys doing here? chalo let’s go. They all are over there, and you guys are still getting ready. Geetu are you ready? Then I will call Arjun to come and take you downstairs.

 

Geet: haan bhabhi. I’m ready

 

Ria: okay then let me call your brother

 

Geet: but where’s papa?

 

Ria: he’s in downstairs talking with all the guests baby. Now come on, let’s go

 

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In downstairs all the guests are coming one after another, and exchanging greetings with maan and his family.

 

Suddenly Maan got a call from an unknown number, so he just excused himself to take the call.

 

Maan: hello

 

No reply

 

Maan: hello, who’s there?

 

Ragini: I just wanted to wish a happy married life to you and Geet

 

Maan: ragini? Is that you?

 

Ragini: I’m sorry Maan, for whatever dad did with your family. Especially what he did to Anukalp uncle and you.I.. I really… really never knew that he could step so low just for fame and money

 

Maan: hey, please don’t cry. It’s not your fault. So stop feeling guilty on all that, please ragini?

 

Ragini: I wanted to meet with you, I even bought a gift for you both, but never had the courage to face you all

 

Maan: don’t do that. I’m telling you na, it’s not your fault. And I’m fine now, nothing I lost on that shot, nor do I have any hard feelings against you and aunty

 

Ragini: thanks. Please convey my greetings to Geet as well

 

Maan: well you can do that as well. Tell aunty that I’ve requested her to come and give us blessing on our marriage

 

Ragini: but Maan. it’s not

 

Maan: please Ragini. Both the families have made a bond long time ago. Even when we both were born. What if your father turned grey and tried to kill dad or me. That will never break the tie that aunty or you have with us. please?

 

Ragini: I will try

 

Maan: okay then, see you tomorrow

 

Ragini: yeah, bye Maan, and thanks

 

Maan: my pleasure. Bye

 

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The party is in full swing. Both the groom side and bride side showed their performance from dance to sing. And all enjoyed a lot. When the last dance performance ended, all were about to go towards the buffet where the food were served. All of a sudden the light of the hall shut down and just a light fall onto the piano.

 

There Maan was sitting with a small smile teasing his lips. Geet smiled at Maan and all claps for him with a thought that Maan is going to sing a song for his soon to be wife.

 

But what actually happened, no one even thought about it.

 

Voice: this song is for my little princess, who came in this world and gave me the new reason to live. Whose one small smile made me feel the peace that I can never feel even when someone will give crores of money on my feet.Cause she is way too precious for me, my little angel, my Geet.

(MUST listen this the song, its way too touching n beautiful. i tried to upload it in mp3, but my net is making me hell angry )

And then another light fall on Mohindar, and all gasped to realize from whom the actual surprise is coming.

 

I’m giving you away
But I’m not letting go
The memories, they flood my mind
Of the little girl I know

 

Mohindar sung those lines, while coming towards Geet, who was still looking at her papa with mouth wide open. Yes she heard her father’s song from many old recording. But never thought her papa will sing again in his life. And that too only for her, on her sangeet.

Once upon a time
You held my hand so tight
You’d close your eyes and say a prayer
Then I’d kiss your head goodnight

 

Mohindar completed those lines and Geet hugged him tight as if to believe it’s the reality, not any dream of he, that she used to see from her childhood.Mohindar smiled at his daughter and pressed a kiss on her forehead in adores.

 

As we dance I keep our love deep within my heart
And thank God for giving me this angel in my arms…

Mohindar pulled her in a dance with him. Geet grinned in happiness. But just the thought of living her family and going into another city, away from all make her teary again.

You’re my little angel
So baby don’t you cry
It’s time to spread your wings and fly
If there’s one thing this father knows
The hardest part is letting go
But you will still always be…
Daddy’s little angel

 

As if understanding her situation Mohindar wiped those tears from her face with a small smile. Only a father knows how hard it is to give his precious bundle of joy to someone else’s hand. But alas! It’s the nature of earth that one day every girl leave their parents to make their own home.

 

It seems like yesterday
Has come and gone so fast
Now my baby’s all grown up
But the memories will last

 

He smiled at her daughter who was still in his arms, hugging him tight with teary eyes. He still remembered how small she was, used to cuddle in his arms in her sleeps. Who used to knock on his door late night just because she had some dreams that teacher was going to snatch all her chocolates as she got low marks in her exams.

 

It’s hard to say goodbye
When you’ve always been so near
But for now I’ll hold you tight
Like those times that I hold dear

 

Mohindar tried to lighten her mood so eyed her to Maan who was looking at them with a wide grin plastered in his face. Geet could understand who’s made the music and helped her father to do all these. She mouthed “I Love You” to him who just bowed his head in their direction.

 

As we dance I keep our love deep within my heart
And thank God for giving me this angel in my arms…

You’re my little angel
So baby don’t you cry
It’s time to spread your wings and fly
If there’s one thing this father knows
The hardest part is letting go
But you will still always be…
Daddy’s little angel

 

Arjunand Riawent forward and hugged Geet tight when they saw her crying in his papa’s arms. Geet too hug both of them, today didn’t know why she felt like not going to leave them, she didn’t even know when she would again get the chance to hug them like today

 

When you were young, I used to laugh
At the funny things you’d say
Right now I just can’t help but smile…
On this blessed day

 

Maan smiled at them and continued to play the piano.Daadi ma smiledand gave a side hug to Natasha very well-known of what she’s feeling as well. When anukalp just smiled to see their strong bond, and he knew, another one is soo to come in this circle, just after one day.

 

You’re my little angel
So baby don’t you cry
It’s time to spread your wings and fly
If there’s one thing this father knows
The hardest part is letting go
But you will still always be…
Daddy’s little angel

I’m giving you away, but I’m not letting go…

 

Both father and son hugged their little angel, making all emotional just to see the scene in front of them. 

Some tried not to cry when they remembered how hard it was for them to give their daughter’s hand in others. 

Some flinch and hold their daughter in their arms, they didn’t even know what they will do when it will be their time to arrange their daughters’ marriage.

tadaaa… how’s it? i know you guys expected romantic dance of maaneet. but it’s done in almost all daily soap n ffs, so i tried something different. hope you guys likes it 

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 59)

 

Part 59

 

Geet’s monologue:

 

I looked at myself in the mirror, draped in a white salwar kamiz. I still remember that day. It’s still fresh in my memory. The day when Maan participated in his first live concert, when I went to him just to tell him that I cannot live without him, when proposed me in front of the whole world, when he was being shot.

 

Somewhere it still felt like a hard pain, somewhere deep inside of my heart. When I saw his white shirt turned into red in his own blood, when he was lay unconscious on the pool of blood.

 

I don’t remember exactly what happened, who called ambulance, or who were with me that time. All I saw was only Maan’s lifeless body. Apart from that everything was like some blur image in my memory.

 

When we reached in the hospital, doctor was trying hard to pull my hand away from him, but I was not ready for it. How could I let him go? What if he didn’t come back to me? I left him for some hours and what took place in those hours. I didn’t want anything bad happened to him anymore.

 

Then I could remember that they left with him. I sat on the floor drenched in his blood. I could hear many voices, but none of those voices attracted me, as I kept looking at the closed door, waiting for just one glimpse of my maan.

 

Suddenly my thoughts broke feeling someone’s hands on my stomach

 

End of Monologue

 

I smiled at our image on the mirror

 

Maan: you are again thinking over it?

 

Geet: I am trying to forget Maan

 

Maan: then try harder, and one more thing. Try to stop thinking about the pasts and enjoy this day, as from tomorrow everything will change.

 

He said and pulled her closer.

 

Geet: you will never leave me, right?

 

Maan sighed and turned her and made her face him.

 

Maan: Geet, stop thinking about that day. See I’m in front of you. Come on jaan, it’s our haldi ceremony today. And I don’t want you to come down with a sad dull face. Okay?

 

Geet: Yes, finally all is going to be alright.

 

Geet said while giving him a bright smile, making Maan smile as well.

 

Geet: by the way, may I know what you are doing in my room?

 

Maan: what else? Come to greet you a very very good morning

 

Maan said in a cheeky voice

 

Geet: oh really? But we are going to meet in downstairs after half hour, remember?

 

Maan: yeah so?

 

Geet: so?

 

Maan: come on Geet, you know my bid with Pinky and all you’re those stupid friends. I have to put haldi 1^st in your face

 

Saying so Maan put out a small polybag and show her the turmeric paste

 

Geet: no ways Maan. You know that mom is going to apply this as a blessing on my face, and if she will see the paste on my face, what if she will feel bad?

 

Maan: no ways, our mom is not like those typical saas bahu serial type mom, you too know that, right?

 

Geet: but all will make fun of me.

 

Maan: then declare to them proudly that my pucchu love me the most

 

Geet: really? So that they all can happily pull my legs in public? Wah, what an idea?

 

Maan: okay fine then. I thought you would be happy as I come here taking so much risks, just for applying haldi on your face

 

Maan sighed while making a very sad pouting face, making Geet curse on her big mouth

 

Geet: arreee, I was joking pucchu. In fact I was also thinking it from last night that how to apply haldi 1^st on your face.

 

Geet said while holding Maan from his waist

 

Geet: but then I’m worried as well for my friends’ big mouths, when they will see the mark on my cheeks

 

Geet said pouting

 

Maan: I will be there na? No one can pull my jaan’s legs

 

Geet: sure na?

 

Maan: of course, cause only I have that right

 

Saying so Maan giggled and in return got one smack on his shoulder

 

Geet: I will run away from this marriage, remember that before making fun of mine

 

Maan pulled her closer and huskily whisper near her ear

 

Maan: run as far as you can. At the end you have to return only to me, remember that

 

Saying so he passionately sucked her earlobe, making her moan

 

Their little romantic moment was interrupted by a knock on her door

 

Both looked at the door horrified, thinking who it was now on that side of door

 

Geet: who’s it?

 

Pinky: sleeping beauty, wake up from your dream land. You are already getting late. Guests are already started to come

 

Geet: pinky just  give me 10 mins to get ready. I’m almost done

 

Ria: okay baba, take your time, but first open the door geetu. Let us help you

 

Maan: say them to wait for 5 minutes

 

Geet nodded and said the same to them

 

Maan hurriedly take some haldi on his hand and applied a little portion on haldi on her left cheek, and filled another check with his wet smooch, making Geet red in blush

 

Geet too did the same, but planted a soft kiss, too shy to do the same like Maan

 

Maan: I will wait for you downstairs, don’t be late Jaan

 

Geet: okay, but be careful, don’t hurt yourself

 

Maan nodded and left the room smoothly using her window, not before planting another kiss lovingly on her forehead

 

It’s what that is exactly happening from last 5 days, as soon as Maan and his family shifted in Delhi for the marriage function.

 

And when I was getting hard for Maan to enter into Handa House, he came up with his another lie. Well it’s just for the sake of her Jaan. He acted like he’s suffering from food poisoning, while eating hotel’s foods. So yesterday morning Mohindar himself went to bring Maan here in Handa House. How can he let him son-in-law to suffer in any problem.

 

Well, if some lies can never hurt anyone, and bring a bright smile on your love one’s face, then they are good, aren’t they? *sam winking*

 

Precap: Haldi Ceremony, and Maan’s surprise to Geet in their sangeet

 

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 58)

Part 58

 

Adi was pacing in the back stage, waiting for Maan

 

Adi: I just hope he can make it in time, it’s getting late

 

Maan: for how many times I told you not to talk with your own self yaar

 

Maan said from his back while smirking at his nervous face

 

Adi: finally you feel like coming sir? There the audiences are planning to throw rotten tomatoes and colorful shoes on us

 

Adi said totally frustrated

 

Maan: accha baba, I’m really sorry. Now just give me exactly 5 minutes. I just need to check all my guitar cord before stepping in the stage

 

Adi: okay okay, do it now, hurry up

 

Maan was checking all the strings of his guitar, when Adi looked at his gloomy face. No matter how much his best friend can try to behave normally in front of him, but he can never hide his expressions, as this Adi know his best friend from childhood

 

Adi: Is Geet okay now?

 

Maan: yes, why?

 

Adi: then why are you sad?

 

Maan: who said I’m sad? Just little bit worried about the performance?

 

Adi: and do you think I’m going to believe your stupid excuses?

 

Maan: I’m saying the truth, now let’s go

 

Maan said while standing up on his feet, but Adi hold his elbow and stopped him from leaving

 

Adi: what’s wrong Maan? Spill it up or else I’ll make sure you will not be in the stage, forget about performing

 

Maan: can we talk about it later?

 

Adi: no, right now. Come on Maan, tell me the truth, we are the best buddies, remember?

 

Maan sighed heavily

 

Maan: It’s over

 

Adi: what? You mean, I mean are you out of your mind?

 

Maan: I can’t harm her relation with her father, damn it

 

Adi: but it doesn’t mean that you have to take this much big step. Do you think you both can be able to live without each other? Are you kidding?

 

Adi said totally frustrated

 

Maan:It was always my fault. So I have to take the decision at the end to make things normal.

 

Adi: you want to take some time? We can manage over there before your entry

 

Maan: no it’s okay Adi. Let’s go

 

Adi: fine then

 

 

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Host: now let’s welcome today’s biggest surprise, all of yours favorite singer, for whom you all are eagerly waiting to see performing. Now just hold your breath for the one and only Maan Singh Khurana, for the first time on live concert.

 

All started clapping and whistling in excitement

 

Maan’s monologue:

I wish you are with me today. Standing in front of me, smiling at me, looking at me proudly. How I wish you would be here when I needed you the most Geet. Don’t know how I will manage to spend my days without you beside me where only in these hours I’m feeling this much frustrated.

 

Geet’s Monologue:

I head the host telling about Maan, peoples’ cheering for him. I know what’s going on in your mind, how you are managing. But you will not have to feel alone Maan. Your geet is coming

 

Her chain of thoughts broke hearing Pinky and Arjun’s argument.

 

Arjun: do you think I’m flying some aero plane?

 

Pinky: please bhaia, just speed up a little bit more

 

Arjun: so that the police can take away my driving license

 

Pinky: or else we will miss his performance bhaia, see he’s already starting his 1^st son and he will be in stage for two songs only

 

Arjun: you guys will take many chances in future. But if we will face any accident then who knows you will miss your life as well

 

Geet: shhh, you guys are not letting me hear his song in peace

 

Geet shouted enable to control her anger, by watching both of them arguing like kids

 

Both stopped their argument and Arjun increase the volume

Play me

 

wo o ooo, wo o ooo

Aasaan nahin yahan aashiq ho jaana

Palkon pe kaanton ko saajaana

Aashiq ko miltaa hain gham ki saugaatein

Sabko na miltaa ye khazaana

(It’s not easy to be a lover here

To adorn thorns on eyelids

A lover gets gifts of sorrows

Not everyone gets this treasure)

 

Maan sung those lines sadly. He never knew one day his own written lines will fall on him, will match with his own life

 

Baaton se aage, vadoon se aage

Dekho zaara tum kabhi

Ye to hai shola

Ye hai chingaari

Ye hai jawaan aag bhi

(Ahead of talks, ahead of promises

See sometimes

It’s a fireball

It’s a spark

It’s wild fire as well)

 

Geet closed her eyes. She remember how Maan broke his own promise to be with her always, not for himself, but only for her own happiness

 

Jismon ke peeche bhaage ho phirte

Utro kabhi rooh mein

Hota kya aashiq, kya aashiqui hai

Hogi khabar tab tum hein

(You run behind bodies

Sometime get down into the souls

What is a lover, what love is

You will get to know)

Wo o ooo ,wo o ooo

 

Maan finished the song and looked ahead to see the huge crowd in front of him. Waving at him, dancing with his tunes. He smiled and waved towards them

 

Maan: are you all enjoying?

 

Mass crowd: yesss

 

Maan: you want some rock songs now?

 

Mass crowd: yesss

 

Maan: okay then, I want you all to sing with me as well

 

Saying so Maan looked at Adi who was with the drum, Adi nodded back at him that he’s ready, smiling Maan grabbed his guitar again

Play me

 

Sinbad the sailor jahaj mein jab chala
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo
Dhundh raha tha ek nayi duniya ka pata
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo

Wo ho anjaani raahon mein tha o o
Wo ho leharo ki baahon mein tha o o

(when Sinbad the sailor was travelling in his ship

Listen my friends

He was searching the address of new world

Listen my friends

He was in unknown paths

He was in the arms of waves)

 

Arjun was trying to find little space to park his car, but there are so many cars already in the parking lot

 

Arjun: looks like it will take time, you guys go and enter inside, and I’m coming behind you

 

As soon as Arjun said that Geet hurriedly came outside started to rush towards the entrance

 

Pinky: geetwait, tickets are with me, you can’t go inside without ticket

 

Arjun: pinky, take care of her okay? Don’t leave her side

 

Pinky: okay bhaia

 

Saying so Pinky to rushed behind geet

 

Sab ne kaha tha in samundaro mein jaana nahi
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo
Khwabon ke piche jaake kuch bhi hai paana nahi
Mere yaar sun lo suno
Wo ho apni hi dhun mein raha o o
Wo ho suntan tha dil ka kaha o o

(Everyone told him not to go in these oceans

Listen my friends

By going behind dreams you will not get anything

Listen my friends

But he was in his own tune

He was used to listen his heart)

 

Pinky holds Geet’s hand, stopping her to go in the front

 

Pinky: are you mad? Did you see the crowd? You can’t go over there. Let’s wait here

 

Geet: no Pinky, I need to show him that I’m here

 

Pinky: but Geet, you are still not perfectly fine

 

Geet: I’m fine Pinky, please let me go

 

Pinky: no Geet, let’s wait for Arjunbhaia then

 

Pinky said firmly

 

Uss ke the jo sapne
Wohi uss ke the apne
Aisa tha sinbad the sailor (sailor)… (2)

(Whatever dreams of his, was only his own

Like this was the Sinbad the sailor)… (2)

 

Geet: please  pinky, let me go. I need to fulfill my promise. I told him that I will be there to cheer him up

 

Geet pleaded, making Pinky sighed in defeat

 

Pinky: fine let’s go, but don’t leave my hand, no matter what, okay?

 

Geet nodded her head. Both hold each other’s hand and started to walk towards the font.

 

Uss ka jahaj khila tufano mein
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo
Phir bhi na aayi kami uss ke armaano mein
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo
Wo deewana aisa hi tha o o
Wo sapno ka hamrahi tha o o

Uss ke the jo sapne
Wohi uss ke the apne
Aisa tha sinbad the sailor (sailor)… (2)

(His ship bloomed in storms

Listen my friends

Still there was no decrease in his desire

Listen my friends

He was crazy like this only

He was the partner of his dreams

Whatever dreams of his, was only his own

Like this was the Sinbad the sailor)… (2)

 

Both the friends were walking in between the crowd of people, but not finding any way to be in front. As all the people were trying to find a place to be the first one to stand in front, making it tougher for Geet in her weak health

 

Wo kuch pane ki chaah mein o o
Wo badhata raha raah mein o o

Gehara samundar tha unchi unchi lehren
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo
Kashtiya jin dekhi mushkil se the hare
Mere yaar sun lo sun lo
(In the want to get something

He kept on moving forward

The ocean was deep and waves were high

Listen my friends

The ship was settling with difficulty

Listen my friends)

 

Geet was trying to make a path for herself, when suddenly she felt two of the man making a wall arounf her. She looked up and saw a known face.

 

One of Maan’s securities saw Geet and came along with another to help her out of the crowd. They protectively circled her and make her stand in front

 

Security: are you okay mam?

 

Geet: thank you sandeep

 

Security: it’s my work mam

 

He smiled and continued to stand beside her and Pinky, so that no one can touch or push them

 

While singing Maan saw Sandeep’s back in the front near the stage. He knotted his eyebrows in confusion as they were supposed to stand on the back stage.

 

He was about to come in front to tell them to go in back, but stopped abruptly. As soon as sandeep stand on one side, he saw her face, looking directly at him.

 

He concentrated on his song thinking it’s just his mere dream, making Geet frown in anger

 

Wo ho saahil ta kaa hi gaya o o
Wo ho manjil ko paa hi gaya o o

Uss ke the jo sapne
Wohi uss ke the apne
Aisa tha sinbad the sailor (sailor)… (2)

(He finally came to the sea shore

He got his destination

Whatever dreams of his, was only his own

Like this was the Sinbad the sailor)… (2)

 

He again looked at the front, and this time saw his Jaan’s frown cute face. Both looked at each other and all there confusions disappeared. 

 

He understood that it’s his Jaan in real

 

She understood what he thought at first to see her here

 

Both smiled at each other in happiness

 

Tum ho toh, gaata hai dil
Tum nahi, toh geet kaha..
Tum ho toh, hai sab haasil
Tum nahi, toh kya hai yaha
Tum ho toh hai
Sapno ke jaisa hasin ek sama…

(When you are there my heart sings

If you are not there then there is no song

If you are there then it feels like I have everything

If you are not here then it’s nothing here

If you are with me

This atmosphere looks like dream)

 

Maan sung those words looking directly at her. Finally his dream come true, his Jaan is here, right in front of her. She’s still looking pale, her eyes teary, but a beautiful smile teasing her lips, making him realize that today he’s the happiest person in the world

 

He didn’t know how she came here, what her family thinks about him. he only knew that he can never live without her.

 

Maan didn’t care what will happen in their future, whether people will accept them together, but he will not let her leave, not in any cost

 

Jo tum ho toh yeh lagta hai
Ke mil gayi har khushi
Jo tum na ho yeh lagta hai
Ke har khushi mein hai kami
Tum ko hai maangti yeh jindagi…

(When you are here then I feel that

I have got every happiness

When you are not with me then I feel that

There is something missing in every happiness

This life only wants you)

 

Maan jumped out of the stage making all astonished. He just kneeled down in front of Geet and sang then lines making Geet cried in happiness.

 

Did he just propose him in front of the world?

 

Did he just said that he will fight to win her family, as he still didn’t know that her papa already accepted him.

 

As soon as Maan complete the song, Geet kneeled down beside him and hug him tightly.

 

Maan: I can never spend one second of my life without you. I love you Jaan

 

Geet: I love you too Maan

 

Some of the audience cheer for them in awe as it’s the most unique way to propose someone, whereas some crabbed in jealousy to realize that Maan is already in love with someone. Pinky screamed in happiness, Adi clapped for the Romeo Juliet, Arjun smiled to see the two innocent soul in love with each other ever so sweetly.

 

He broke the hug and kissed Geet’s forehead. He was about to climb up to the stage when Geet stopped him

 

Geet: Maan I need to tell you that

 

Maan: shhh, you don’t need to worry. I will win your papa’s love, I promise. You just relax and wait for me in back stage. Sandeep take Pinky and her in the back side.

 

Maan: thank you guys who ever come today to cheer me up. I thank each of you for all your love and appreciation that you guys bestowed upon me. And I want to share a small secret of my life with all of your today.

 

I used to believe in love, but in a different way. Yes for me love existed in this world. But it’s not always about the feelings between a boy and a girl. I used to think that I am deeply in love with my music. But less did I know the song of my life would come to me as Geet. My Geet, my song of life

Today i want to say the world that I’m deeply in love with Geet, and I will always be with her no matter what happens in our near future, Maan and Geet will be always together

 

All clapped at his words, at his true love. Pinky hugged Geet in happiness while Geet felt like she’s fallen in love with this man once again.

 

Maan: thank you guys

 

Saying so Maan turned around smiling at Geet, to reach near her as soon as possible. But the gun shot sound made everything silent. Geet looked at Maan shockingly. Adi shouted and ran towards Maan.

 

But before he could reach, Maan fall down with a thump.

 

Geet stood there still in shock, as she saw his white short getting red in his blood

 

Precap: The LAST PART

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 57)

 

Part 57

 

It’s already morning,

 

Maan looked at his Jaan who’s sleeping peacefully holding his hand tightly. He smiled unconsciously as he remembered how embarrassed he was some hours ago.

 

One by one all came to see her, but she was already in sleep due to the medicine.

 

When Arjun entered in the room Maan tried to stand up and remove his hand. But in her sleep also Geet just mumbled something and clinched his hand tightly.

 

Ria tried hard to control her smile, whereas both Maan and Arjun choose not to look at one another.

 

What made Maan worried was Mohindar’s absence. He didn’t come for once to check on Geet. It made Maan sad that it might be because of him this long gap created between them.

 

Maan’s chain of thoughts broke when Geet stirred a little in her sleep.

 

He put the chair closer to her

 

As soon as Geet opened her eyes, her eyes searched for Maan. Maan smiled warmly at her and pressed her hand in assurance that he’s still there with her

 

Maan: hey sleeping beauty

 

Geet: hey

 

Maan: how are you feeling now? Is it paining?

 

Geet: how can I feel any pain when you are with me?

 

Geet said innocently making Maan sighed

 

Maan: you are a crazy little woman, you know that?

 

Geet: yes, crazily in love with her Maan

 

Geet said while giving a wide smile to him

 

Maan tried to smile while thinking about how to tell her that he need to leave now.

 

Geet: hey what happened?

 

Maan: nothing, just wondering, you know

 

Geet: wondering how to tell me that you need to leave?

 

Maan hold her hands and bring himself more closely to her

 

Maan: Jaan I should leave now

 

Geet: yeah, I understand.

 

Maan: but before leaving, I want a promise from you

 

Geet: what promise?

 

Maan: you will be happy even if we will not be together in future

 

Geet: Maan, won’t you try to talk with papa?

 

Maan: I promise you that I’ll not force you in this relation, even if you will leave me and move apart but promise me Geet you will live you life happily

 

Maan said Geet while putting her hands on his head, making geet whimper in pain

 

She tried so hard not to break down when her family in just outside the room. Even when her Maan is leaving her, just for the sake of her happiness, her father’s happiness.

 

Maan: Promise me Geet that you will marry and live happily with whomever your papa will choose for you

 

Geet nodded while trying to suppress her cry

 

Geet: but promise me you will never stop singing, and will be more and more famous so that all girl will drool on you like the way I used to

 

Maan chuckled while trying not to spill his tears

 

Maan: I’ll make sure in future both you and your daughter will drool on me, making your husband feel offended and jealous

 

Both smiled trying to lighten the mood

 

Maan: Take care Geet. Be happy

 

Geet: I love you Maan, I really do

 

Geet cried enable to hide her pain anymore

 

Maan: sshhh, I know jaan. I know that you love me. But i want you to love your family more to choose them over me. Make them proud of you Geet

 

Geet: I will. Please don’t say bye now. I can’t bear it

 

Maan: no ways. I will surely find you in my concert in future

 

Saying so Maan pecked her forehead and left the room hurriedly. But both of them missed the person who was listening to them from outside the room, with guild imprinted all over his face

 

Geet sobbed in pain to see Maan moving away from her. She tried her best not to be weak, knowing it will only cause more pain to her Maan. But now when he left, she couldn’t able to control her whimper.

 

It hurts. It hurts a lot that someone stabbed her heart with a sharp knife. She hide her face on the pillow in order to stop her crying sound.

 

After a minute or so she felt someone putting a hand on her shoulder, and then sitting beside her.

 

When she looked up she saw her father’s moist eyes.

 

Geet tried her best to stop her cry. She already hurt Maan, now she don’t want to hurt another one she loved the most. They both were her whole world. She will made sure that her father will be happy now

 

Geet: I’m sorry papa, I will not disobey you. See, Maan too left now

 

Mohindar wiped her tears and hugged her tight.

 

Mohindar: no beta. I’m sorry.

 

Geet looked up at her father’s face, while still hugging him tightly. After so many days she was with her father now.

 

Geet: papa aap

 

Mohindar: in my own misery I never saw the place where my own daughter will be happy. I’m sorry beta. Your momma will be so angry on me today, I broke my promise Geet. I couldn’t able to take care of you. Couldn’t able to take care of your happiness

 

Geet: no papa, please don’t cry. You are the best papa one could get. I’m sorry that I hurt you. I will never do it again. Please papa, don’t cry

 

Geet pleaded while wiping his tears

 

Mohindar: I will talk with Maan’s father. I will ask maan’s hand from them. I promise beta, I will do whatever you want, but please never ever think about leaving me

 

Geet: It’s ok papa, aap pleae shant ho jaiye

 

Mohindar: you know Geet? After your mother left me, I felt that I’ve left alone in this big world. Just then you cried out as if to reminder me that you are still there for me. And when I took you in my arms, I got the reason to live my life. In all these years, you two become my reasons to live, to survive. And I’m truly proud that God gifted me an angel in the form of my little Geet

 

Geet: I love you Papa. I’m sorry that I hurt you

 

Mohindar: you can never hurt me beta. Now you better be fine soon, then we will contact with Maan’s family.

 

Arjun: well they are already here, now if you also agreed, we should talk soon before these two kids do something else

 

Said Arjun from behind

 

Mohindar and Geet looked at the door and saw Arjun and Ria smiling at her, whereas Anukalp, Natasha and Daadi ma was also present along with Pinky

 

Mohindar stood up and went towards them.

 

Mohindar: I’m sorry maa ji for everything that happened

 

Mohindar said guiltily to Daadi ma

 

Daadi ma: ye bhi koi baat hua? You did what one father should do as a father. Let’s forget everything and talk with Pandit ji.

 

Natasha: haan, aab to bas jald se jald mujhe aapne bahu ko ghar lekar jaana hai

 

Anukalp: but yes in all these Maan got a lesson.

 

All looked at him confusingly

 

Anukalp: never to enter in someone’s house without permission.

 

Anukalp joked. While all laughed

 

Natasha went near Geet and pecked on her forehead

 

Natasha: you made us so worried beta. Never do that again

 

Geet: I’m sorry aunty

 

Natasha: aunty nehi mom. Abhi se adaat daal lo ma bolne ka

 

Pinky chirped near Geet

 

Pinky: you guys should do all these dramas later. Because of you I lost the chance of watching Maan’s very first concert. You fool

 

Daadi ma: well you guys can still go

 

Pinky: but how? We don’t have any tickets

 

Daadi ma: you can take ours. Waise bhi, iss umar mai mujhe koi shokh nehi hai jumping ki

 

Pinky gave the most big grin and looked at Geet

 

Pinky: chal na Geet, please. I planned so much to shout and dance in front

 

Geet: but pinky, how can we go?

 

Mohindar: go and enjoy. Arjun will take you both then

 

Geet: papa aap?

 

Mohindar smiled softly at his daughter.

 

Mohindar: Go and tell him that you will be with him onward, every single day, in his every single concert to cheer him up

 

Geet grin widely at her father while fresh tears roll down from her eyes

Pinky: Geet now get up, we need to hurry up. Only half hour left to start his first performance. 

 

Pinky said while pulling Geet by her hand

 

Arjun: okey, you guys hurry up. I’m going to take my car from parking

 

Saying so arjun left with his car key

 

Geet self-thought: I’m coming Maan. Your girlfriend will not miss your 1^st concert. Oppsss, your soon to be wife. Wo bhi officially with all of our family members’ acceptance

 

Precap: Geet and Pinky in Maan’s concert.

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 56)

 

Part 56

 

More three hours left

 

Arjun filled the form and now sitting in front of the room. He is feeling guilty to talk with his father like that. But the guilt of not being able to take care of his little sister’s happiness, not to be with her when she was in a vicious situation to make this big step, is far big and not letting him breath for a minute.

 

Another scream came out from the room, making Arjun close his eyes in pain. The screams are coming inside of Geet’s throat, even when she is unconscious.

 

Tears welled up from Arjun’s close eye lids. His gudia is like his own daughter, who is the biggest part of his life. That small girl, who never even saw the shadow of pain and hurt, is now on the room, screaming in pain. And he can’t even do anything apart from sitting here and wait for the doctor.

 

He wiped the tears and hides his face on his palm and sighed heavily. He has had enough. Now Geet herself will decide what she wants. And he will not let his father to step into her path. Not this time.

 

Yes he is guilty for talking with his father this way. He shouldn’t do it. And he will seek the forgiveness for his words, but he also had to show his father the reality, the reality that his father did not understand in his possessiveness of saving his daughter from the pain he once felt years ago.

 

Meanwhile in the small mandir in hospital:

 

 

Mohindar is praying for his daughter’s wellbeing when he feels someone’s hand on his shoulder. Turning around he saw Ria sitting near him.

 

Ria: please don’t feel bad on Arjun’s words papa. He’s just worried for Geet

 

Mohindar: I know beta. I do understand his feelings. And may be somewhere I deserved all those words

 

Ria: Papa, can I say you something?

 

Mohindar nodded

 

Ria: I know you were just trying to protect our Geet, but maybe we should not be so hard on her. We could take information from others about Maan. Like how he is with people, how’s his personal life, did anyone heard any mishap about him related with girls. You know?

 

Mohindar: I did a big sin Ria, and I know today Geet is here only because of me

 

Ria: but papa, she was happy today. She was actually thinking forward to have a talk with you. When I was leaving she was actually talking positively. I never thought she would take any drastic step like this. I would not leave her today. It’s also my fault.

 

Mohindar: no you are not in any fault. It’s all because of me. I told her that I was wrong by accepting your mother’s decision when she told me to choose Geet over her. Or else I would never lose my your mother in law over a daughter like her

 

Ria looked shockly at him

 

Mohindar: I lost my daughter. The girl who always used to tell me that no can harm her because she’s her papa’s princess, is now on the OT harmed by her own father

 

Mohindar chocked and let his tears fall down from his eyes. Only he knew how he’s feeling. His only daughter is fighting for his life and he is the reason of all these is killing him within

 

Ria can’t able to talk for some minutes. She keeps thinking how Arjun will react after hearing that. Because this is the only reason for which Geet took this big step. Geet’s that latter can make her understand in how much pain she was while writing that. But it’s already done. She should not let this issue stress any more

 

What you said is already said. You will not tell anyone what you said to Geet – Ria said softly

 

Mohindar: But

 

Ria: I know you never meant it, you can never mean this. Because we all know how much important she is for all of us. So let’s pray that she will be fine and forget whatever happened in these days.

 

Something is not meant to come out. Let them hide for the betterment of every relations – she thought to herself

 

Near the OT:

 

Arjun hear the sound of someone approaching.

 

Arjun: now what do you want? Don’t you think you actually ruined much enough? Now let my sister live in peace.

 

Pinky: bhaia please let him meet Geet for one time, please?

 

Arjun look up hearing Pinky’s voice. He thought it’s his father. But whom he sees make him guiltier.

 

Maan is standing there folding his hand together in front of him. And Pinky is standing behind Maan.

 

Maan: just for once, please let me go inside. I just want to stay with her for once bhaia, please.

 

Maan pleads while his face is showing the pain he is bearing within him

 

Arjun sighed. How can he stop Maan not to meet with Geet. He doesn’t have that strength.

 

Arjun: she’s still in OT. Doctors are washing her stomach to take out those medicines.

 

Maan looked at the OT door while Pinky squeezes his hand in assurance of Geet’s safety.

 

Arjun: and sorry Maan. Those words were not meant for you. I thought it was papa.

 

Maan only nods and go to the OT door, trying hard to show one glance if his jaan. Arjun can see the restlessness and turmoil running inside him

 

Two hours left:

 

As soon as the OT door opens, Arjun rushed there. Maan is already standing there, on that same position from last 3 hours.

 

Doctor: she is out of danger now. We washed her stomach and did some tests which are showing that nothing is there in her blood. Just make sure when she will be in her sense, don’t let her talk that much. It will be painful for her because of the sour throat. She will be moved on a cabin now. So you all can meet with her. But only one in once as many voices will wake her. Let her sleep

 

Arjun: thanks a lot doctor.

 

Doctor: you welcome. And yes can you come with me? You need to complete some formalities regarding the cabin and operation

 

Arjun: sure doctor

 

Arjun looks at Maan and said

 

Arjun: you go and stay with her. I’m going with the doctor

 

Maan look at him totally shocked

 

I trust you – Arjun smile a little at him and go with the doctor

 

Soon Geet is shifted in a two bed cabin. Ria came and help the sister to change her dress and to make her sleep in a comfortable position. And now only Maan is sitting beside her, holding her hand, waiting for his jaan to open her eyes and to let him take his breath out as because from last seven hours he is living like a dead soul.

 

At around mid-4am,

 

Geet opened her eyes, but stopped again for the light that was not letting her open her eyes. She heard some whispering something, then someone holding her hand, someone caressing her hair.

 

She somehow opened her eyes to see the doctor coming inside along with a sister. She looked around and whom she saw made her focus on that particular person only.

 

Doctor checked her and told her that she can stay this night and can leave the next day and instructed her to take complete bed rest and liquid foods.

 

All the time Geet was keep looking at Maan. It’s like everything around her turned completely blur

 

Arjun left with the doctor to talk, while Ria thought to give them some time alone and left with Pinky.

 

Maan came near her bed while Geet keep looking at him; she was not even blinking what if he would disappear.

 

Maan quietly sat on a chair in front of her.

 

Geet: naraz ho?

 

Maan: don’t talk with me

 

Geet: this much angry?

 

Maan: how could you do this? You never even thought once about me? Never even thought how will I live with a thought that my life left me

 

Geet: I’m sorry, how would I saw you going away from me. Its better

 

Maan: wait till you are ok. I will take you in a terrace and jump down. Then you will understand what I felt in all these hours

 

Geet smiled

 

Maan: now stop smiling

 

Geet tried to say something and coughed. At the same time chocked in throat pain

 

Maan: sshhh. Don’t talk. No need to talk. You rest now.

 

Geet: no, you will go away then

 

Maan: I have to go jaan

 

Geet: but stay tills the morning, please

 

Maan: I will be here, just right after you. Now sleep jaan

 

Geet: promise you will not go away when I will sleep

 

Maan: I promise I will be here and you will find me here when you will open your eyes after your sleep

 

Geet clenched his one hand and tucked it inside of her face and closed her eyes. Maan pecked her forehead and soon she went into deep slumber.

 

Precap 1:

Maan: I promise you that I’ll not force you in this relation, even if you will leave me and move apart but promise me Geet you will live you life happily

Maan said Geet while putting her hands on his head, making geet whimper in pain

She tried so hard not to break down when her family in just outside the room. Even when her Maan is leaving her, just for the sake of her happiness, her father’s happiness.

Maan: Promise me Geet that you will marry and live happily with who ever your papa will choose for you

Geet nodded while trying to suppress her cry

Geet: but promise me you will never stop singing , and will be more and more famous so that all girl will drool on you like the way I used to

Maan chuckled while trying not to spill his tears

Maan: I’ll make sure in future both you and your daughter will drool on me, making your husband feel offended and jealous

Both smiled trying to lighten the mood

Maan: Take care Geet. Be happy

Geet: I love you Maan, I really do

Geet cried enable to hide her pain anymore

Maan: sshhh, I know jaan. I know that you love me. But i want you to love your family more to choose them over me. Make them proud of you Geet

Geet: I will. Please don’t say bye now. I can’t bear it

Maan: no ways. I will surely find you in my concert in future

saying so Maan pecked her forehead and left the room hurriedly. But both of them missed the person who was listening to them from outside the room, with guild imprinted all over his face

Precap 2:

 

Mohindar: Go and tell him that you will be with him onward, every single day, in his every single concert to cheer him up

Geet grin widely at her father while fresh tears roll down from her eyes

Pinky: Geet now get up, we need to hurry up. Only half hour left to start his first performance. 

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 55)

 

After reading all yours comments, I feel like explaining two things. So read below as it’s related to the story.

Firstly, you all are highly angry on Mohindar for his stubbornness and not accepting Maan. Come on Guys, he’s a father after all. So he feels over protective towards his daughter’s security. And it’s normal as a father. So mohindar is not wrong in his place. I can share my Abbu’s one thought for this. Though he doesn’t have any past but still he always declines all the proposals that keep coming for my elder two sisters if the boy stays in abroad. According to my Abbu he doesn’t know whether the boy is dancing in bars with so many girls or taking alcohol in abroad (as alcohol is prohibited in Islam). So he directly says a BIG no to those proposals no matter how qualified those boys are. And it’s just the protectiveness of my Abbu that he wants to save us girls to stay living happily in front of him and want our secure future. Same thing goes for Mohindar, I guess. But yes he should get a reality check as well

Secondly, STOP abusing my Maan. He can’t just run behind Geet and get inside of Handa Mansion, can he? Already Geet was facing enough problems, so he cannot go to her house right now. He had to try something else and has to talk with Geet by taking someone’s support.

And oh yes, I’ve got my 2^nd spammer in Sargoshiyan Thread. So this update is specially for the two spammers, Vanshi and Deviraju

 

Part 55

 

Pinky yawns and looks at her phone, which was ringing continuously

 

Pinky looked at the screen and saw Maan calling

 

Pinky: Jija ji , now please don’t tell me to go to Geet’s house as you need to talk to her. Its 8 pm now

 

Pinky joked

 

Maan: Did you talk with Geet?

 

Maan’s voice and seriousness on his tune made Pinky realize that something was in a mess

 

Pinky: Maan is everything all right?

 

Maan: I don’t know Pinky. Geet came to meet with me in the park and then she was just talking about some useless stuff. I don’t understand what’s running on her mind. I was trying to call her but her mobile is also switched off.

 

 

Pinky: hold on Maan. What she said to you? Is everything all right between you both?

 

Maan sighed and said in a frustrated tone

 

Maan: it was all my mistakes. If I would not tell her to talk with her father, this would never happen. I’m sure Geet’s papa told her something and she is hurt. Pinky can you just call on her landline and make a conference call with me. I cannot call her in landline

 

Pinky: I will do it, but what she said to you? Why are you so worried for?

 

Maan: she was talking about breaking up with me

 

Pinky: bull shits, that stupid fool, you just wait and let me talk with her. She’s gone now

 

Maan: pinky, just don’t tell her anything. I need to talk with her and make sure she is fine. Don’t know why I’m not feeling right

 

Pinky: don’t worry Maan. Ria bhabhi is also there in home. Nothing will happen with her. It might be like uncle told her something in anger and she is upset over it

 

Maan: yes, I know. Can you just call her and connect our calls together so that I can have a talk with her

 

Pinky: yes sure. Just hold on I’m calling her

 

Maan was walking restlessly on the room while Pinky was calling on Geet’s landline number. But no one was answering the phone.

 

On the fourth time, Nakul their caretaker received the call.

 

Nakul: hello

 

Pinky: dada it’s Pinky. Where’s Geet? Call her and tell her that I want to talk with her right now

 

Nakul: didi Geet didi is not at home

 

Pinky: not at home? Where’s she at this time?

 

Nakul: wo all went to the hospital, madam took so many medicines all together. Then Arjun bhaia and uncle ji broke the door and went for hospital

 

Pinky: what? Oh my God. Do you know in which hospital?

 

Nakul: no didi, they didn’t call back in home. And it’s almost 2 hours now

 

Pinky just cut the call as soon as she heard the sound of some glasses fallen in floor. She understood it’s done by Maan

 

Pinky: Maan? Maan you there?

 

Maan: I shouldn’t let her leave that time. I knew something was wrong when she was talking all that. How I let her leave? I shouldn’t

 

Pinky: Maan just calm down. Let me call Ria bhabhi and ask her the hospital name. Just wait for my call Maan. Maan do you hear me? Just wait for my call

 

Saying so Pinky cut the call.

 

Maan rushed towards the cabinet to grab his shirt. He doesn’t care anymore. He will go to his Jaan, no matter what no one can stop him now. He tried to be polite with others and let them decide their life, but not anymore. He had have enough now

 

Maan received Pinky’s call in the very 1^st ring

 

Pinky: city hospital. Maan just don’t do anything wrong please. I’m on my way. We will go inside but together. Please Maan don’t make the situation worst. For Geet’s sake, please Maan

 

Maan: just don’t be late. Come soon

 

Saying so Maan locked his hotel room, rushed outside while dialing his mom’s number.

 

 

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Geet’s painful screams can hear from outside of the room.  Arjun was looking inside of the room in every 5 minutes, whereas Ria’s tears were nowhere to stop.

 

As soon as they reached in the hospital with a pale and cold Geet, doctor informed them the medicines already started showing its reaction. So they moved her for stomach wash immediately.

 

As soon as a sister came out from the Mohindar, Arjun and Ria rushed towards her.

 

Mohindar: sister my daughter?

 

Sister: We cannot say anything right now. Sir told me to give you this form to sign in as patients health is not in a good condition

 

Ria: form?

 

Sister: yes mam. Patient’s guardian needs to sign this form with the condition that we will try as much as we can but if the patient cannot able to survive or in future the patient will not be able to live as a normal person, the hospital will not take any liabilities.

 

Arjun: she will be fine na?

 

Sister: we are not sure if she will be fine after her stomach wash. If not then we will have to change the blood of her whole body as well. You guys have to sign this form, only then we will continue our procedures.

 

Saying so Sister gave the form in to mohindar’s hand and went inside the room.

 

Mohindar was about to go towards the chair seat to fill the form when Arjun asked him from behind

 

Arjun: what did you say to her papa?

 

Mohindar: Arjun?

 

Arjun: Ria was telling me during lunch that Geet herself came out of her room and was cooking your favorite dishes for you. She was in a good mood and was telling Ria that she will talk with you today. Then what had happened in between those 4 hours that Geet took such step?

 

Mohindar didn’t reply.

 

Arjun: what did you say to my sister? She was not a girl to take such huge step. You must said her something big. What did you say to my sister?

 

Arjun asked with a loud voice while other people on the corridor looked at them. Ria pulled Arjun by grabbing his arm

 

Ria: arjun people’s looking, stop it. We will talk about all these later. Now it’s not the right time, please?

 

Arjun didn’t reply to her and told to his father in a grave voice

 

Arjun: your brother betrayed you that will not mean that Maan is also a betrayer. If he was he would do something wrong with Geet in these 3 months and left her in Mumbai. He would not come with his family. I never knew papa that your anger will let you step this much low. Because of your own perception today your own daughter is fighting on that room just to breath. I wish mumma was here today with Geet then no one would be able to hurt my sister like you did from last 9 days.

 

Ria: Arjun please, let’s go

 

Arjun: you failed on your promise papa. You promised mumma that you will take care of Geet and today you are the one for whom she is suffering here. Mumma will never forgive you. And yes, I will not leave you if anything will happen to my gudiya

 

Saying so Arjun took the form from Mohindar’s hand and left from there

 

Ria: papa wo Arjun was just hurt so he just blabbered what came in his mind. Please aap

 

Mohindar: no beta, he said the truth. I failed to take care of my daughter. Your mother in law must be angry on me today. i was so engrossed in the past that I never thought in the name of protecting my daughter I was throwing her near death. I was I just

 

Ria: papa please calm down. Everything will be fine. Nothing will happen to Geetu.

 

Mohindar: no no, nothing will happen to her. I lost my wife but I will not let God snatch my daughter from me. Then for whom I will live beta?

 

Mohindar asked Ria while tears welled up in his eyes. Ria too cried. She doesn’t know what to say to handle the situation.

 

Precap: Arjun heard the sound of someone approaching and looked up. What he saw made him guiltier.

 

Maan stood there folding his hand together in front of him while said in a pleading voice. And Pinky was standing behind Maan. His face was showing the pain he is bearing within him

 

Maan: just for once, please let me go inside. I just want to stay with her for once bhaia, please.

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 54)

Part 54

 

Maan looked at his phone and saw it’s from Geet’s landline.

 

Maan: so madam is already missing me?

 

Geet: Hmmm, where are you?

 

Maan: geet you ok?

 

Geet: yes. I’m fine Maan. Where are you?

 

Maan: on my way to pinky’s home

 

Geet: pinky’s home? Why?

 

Maan: actually this morning someone was asking for her boyfriend’s concert ticket. Just going to give those ticket’s to Pinky. Tomorrow at 2 pm. don’t forget and don’t be late. Adi will bring you both in backstage

 

Geet: Maan I want to meet with you

 

Maan: yes jaan, we are again meeting tomorrow.

 

Geet: no I want to meet now

 

Maan: now? Did you talk with uncle?

 

Geet: yes, about that only

 

Maan: everything ok jaan?

 

Geet: yes maan everything is ok now. Can you meet me in xyz park? Then I’m coming in half hour.

 

Maan: okey I’m coming. I will give these tickets to you then.

 

Geet: hmmm, bye then. Don’t be late

 

Maan: ok bye

 

Maan put the phone on his pocket and turned the car while calling Pinky.

 

Maan: haan pinky. Listen I’m not coming near your house. Wo geet wanted to meet so I will give the tickets to her only. You both don’t be late tomorrow, ok?

 

Pinky: it’s not right jija ji. I was the one who helped you both to meet today. And you both are planning for date without even informing me. At least one small treat would not hurt na?

 

Maan: Sali ji, you will get your treat tomorrow. For now, let me enjoy my date with my jaan

 

Pinky: then I don’t have any problem. And also I don’t want to be bore between two hopeless romantic couple

 

Maan: oh really? I will see how romantic you will be.

 

Pinky: ok ok, now go. And don’t forget to give the tickets to Geet

 

Maan: yes I will give them. Bye Sali ji

 

Pinky: bye jija ji

 

 

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Maan came out from the car and saw Geet already reached there. The shy was turned black in clouds looking like any moment heavy rain will start.

 

Maan: jaan, the rain will start any moment. Couldn’t we talk tomorrow?

 

Geet: no maan, it’s urgent

 

Maan: okey fine. Let’s go to some café where we can sit and will talk

 

Geet: no I have to leave early

 

Maan: accha at least lets go to the car. And here take these tickets or else I will forget later and then pinky will start her curse session.

 

Geet: I can’t take them

 

Maan: what? Madam you were the one who said that you will never miss my first concert, and for that I had to manage these last tickets for me. So better stop joking

 

Geet: maan I can’t maintain this relationship

 

Maan looked at Geet totally shocked.

 

Maan: Jaan what is it? Did uncle said anything to

 

Geet: no no. it’s not about papa. It’s totally about me and my feelings.

 

Maan: what do you mean?

 

Geet: Maan I can’t go against my family. So I’m ending this relation here

 

Maan: Jaan relax. Let me talk with uncle. I will come to your house tonight. Then I will talk with him. I’m sure nothing will be more prior to him than his daughter’s happiness.

 

Geet: and for me, no other relation is prior than my father’s relation with me. I cannot hamper this relation. And I thought about this. I’m feeling that much sad while talking this decision. May be its just my childish attraction towards you. We spend times together when I was apart from my family, so thought it as love. But now when I’m here, seriously Maan I’m not feeling the same attraction towards you

 

Maan: Geet stop it

 

Maan hissed at her words

 

Geet: no Maan, this is the truth. For me my father my family is everything. You know I used to like your songs, then drool on you imagining some handsome faces. And with times, these feelings now also start to disappear

 

Maan jerked her towards him while grabbing her shoulders

 

Maan: it’s not any mere attraction Geet. Mind your words and tell me correctly. Did anyone tell you anything?

 

Geet: no one told me anything. I went home and think about everything from the beginning. You know I don’t feel that deep feeling about you and

 

Maan: shut up Geet

 

Geet: please Maan. It will be good if you too understand it. The sooner you will accept it the better it will be for you and your career. In future you will get more girls like me who will drool on your success. And I’m sure among them you will find a perfect girl

 

Maan: Geet stop these bull shits

 

Geet: move on maan. I just wanted to tell you everything clearly. So called you here.now I need to leave

 

Maan: don’t do it Geet

 

Geet: I’m doing the right thing Maan. Thanks God that I understood that it’s not love. Or else in future no one would be happy. Good bye Maan and all the very best for you future.

 

Saying so geet started to leave. She came out near the park gate and called a taxi. She was about to get inside when Maan pulled her from behind.

 

Maan: don’t do it Geet

 

Maan pleaded helpelessly, not understanding what else to say to make Geet understand.

 

Geet: move on Maan

 

Saying so Geet came out from his hold and got inside the taxi. Maan keep looking at the taxi till it disappear on the traffic.

 

 

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A girl’ a simple girl’ is sitting in front of the mirror’ wearing deep red lehenga’ but there is no one to help her to get ready’ no one is here’ nor its her wedding day’

 

She is sitting alone’ her eyes are swollen and red’ continuously tears are escaping from her eyes’ but there is no one to wipe off her tears’

 

“Where are you mumma’ your gudia need you today’ Papa is not here with me mumma’ just the way he promised you one day'”

 

She looked at herself in the mirror’ more tears make their way out’

 

“You promised me Maan’ that no matter what happen you will always understand me’ then why you just turned away from me’ for once at least tried to understand what my heart wanted to tell you today’ you loved me from three months’ but I’ I loved you from the day I started to dream’ started to dream about my future’ started to dream about my prince’ when I heard your voice I started to consider you as my husband’ how could you even think that you didn’t mean anything to me'”

 

“You mean my world Maan… you were always special for me… you are still special for me Maan… you are still my reason to breath… but what I could do Maan… i can never go against my papa’s will… i can’t be happy with you if my own father is against our relation… nor i can live without you…”

 

She opens her drawer and takes out a bottle of sleeping pill… and start walking towards the balcony…

 

It’s raining outside… like the way her heart is bleeding in pain… she reminded about her past days… she was the ladli of her father… but now her father doesn’t even look up at her face…

 

The rain reminded her about her past…the sweet memories with her Maan… their 1st kiss… their 1st confession of love…

 

She is sitting in the balcony from past 10 minutes… cuddled up with her heavy dress… it’s her mother’s wedding dress… she always wanted to be the bride of Maan… wanted to hold his hand in front of the world… wanted to declare him as her prince proudly… but destiny planned something else for her…

 

Drenched in rain she cried her heart out… “Kash Maan, kash aap yaha hoti meri maang varne ki liye…to mai aapki hi bankar aapni aakhri saas le pati…”

 

Everything in front of her started to blur… then turned dark… she closed her swollen eyes…

 

 

 

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It’s raining from so long. Arjun and Ria reached home very lately at the same time, as on the way back to home their car’s engine stopped and it took a lot of time to start the car again.

 

Mohindar too returned home at the same time. Mohindar directly went to his room, where Arjun went towards Geet’s room

 

Ria looked at their retrained figures, everything change now, in a matter of one week this family’s happiness turned into a dark shadow now.

 

Whenever Mohindar came from any journey it was Geet who used to came first to hug her father and started to tell each and every details against her brother,Arjun. And now she used to sit in her room all day long, after like 8 days, she stepped outside of her room. She just hope Geet will get her happiness

 

Now a days Arjun also become upset for her gudia, though Geet is telling them that she is fine, but her face tells all the truth, what’s going on her now.

 

Arjun tried many times to talk with her, to make her realize everything is alright, but their Geetu is upset as her father stopped talking with her. And it’s the biggest punishment for her. Don’t know when everything will be like before

 

Arjun knocked Geet’s door many times,

 

Arjun: Geet, gudia, open your door, hum pounch gaye ghar pe

 

But no reply from other side of the door

 

Ria come near Arjun and whispered,

 

Ria: maybe she is sleeping Arjun, let’s go, you can talk with her tomorrow morning

 

Arjun looked at Ria in moist eyes, its making him weak to see his gudia living like a dead body

 

Ria cups his face and smiled a little and said,

 

Ria: don’t worry, she will be fine soon, we are here for her, right?

 

Arjun nodes and both headed towards their room

 

 

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In Mohindar’s room:

 

Mohindar come from the washroom and go to the bed, while switching off the light he finds a paper folding near the table lamp.

 

He takes his spectacles and takes the paper, he opens it and understands that its Geet’s handwriting

 

 

“Papa,
When i was born,
You were there to catch me when i fall, whenever and wherever.
When i said my first words,
You were there for me,
to teach me the whole dictionary if need be.
When i took my first steps,
You were there to encourage me on.
When i had my first day at school,
you were there to give me advice and help me with my homework.
You were there for me through all the times and more, the good and bad.

But you this child made you sad, made you cry

I’m sorry papa, but I never wanted to do it in my wildest dream

I can’t choose Maan over you, nor I can live my life without Maan

So I decided to stay with both of you, but in this earth it’s not possible

I choose to go and stay with mumma, from where I can see both of you

I know you don’t wanna see my face, but can’s take my last breathe happily without telling you that how much you mean to me papa
So i just wrote this to say ‘I LOVE YOU PAPA!!!”

(some lines are copied from Books of quotes, and i add my own lines with it, i hope no one will copy it in future)

 

As soon as he completes reading the letter, his facial expressions change. The paper slips from his hand and he ran like a maniac towards Geet’s room, while shouting for Arjun.

 

PRECAP: Some Reality check to Mohindar, by none other than arjun

 

Sargoshiyan – Whisper of Love (Part 53)

 

Part 53

 

“Geet where are you” – Ria called from upstairs.

 

She went to Geet’s room but couldn’t find her so called her loudly

 

Geet: I’m in Kitchen Bhabhi

 

Ria came inside and saw Geet cutting vegetables.

 

Ria: Geetu, are you hungry? You could tell me. Now come on tell me what you want, I’ll make it for you

 

Geet: no bhabhi. I am just preparing lunch for papa

 

Ria looked at her shocked and then gave a knowing look to her. In reply Geet gave a wide grin

 

Ria: so? Am I missing something?

 

Geet shrugged her shoulder.

 

Geet: I thought as I have to make him understand that Maan is not bad for me. I have to talk with papa for that. So why not making lunch for him and during the lunch time we will talk.

 

Ria: fine. It’s a good idea. But why it came all so suddenly, when madam was not even talking with me from last 8 days?

 

Geet: Maan suggested this

 

Ria: what? Don’t tell me you talk with him

 

Geet: I meet with him bhabhi.

 

Ria: honey you know how things are going. You shouldn’t

 

Geet hold Ria’s hand and looked at her sincerely

 

Geet: I know bhabhi papa is strict in his decision because he wants my happiness. But I have to make him understand that my happiness lies with Maan only. Bhabhi I will not take any wrong path or hide anything from you all. But I can’t live without Maan

 

Ria sighed. She too saw the honesty on Maan’s eyes when he came with his parents. And if he was not serious about Geet, he would not come with his parents. And Arjun’s thoughts too now softened towards Maan as he wants to see his sister happy.

 

Ria: just don’t be childish while talking

 

Geet: you too think the same?

 

Geet asked while pouting

 

Ria: why Maan too said the same?

 

Geet: don’t disturb me now. I’m busy in cooking

 

Geet said trying to act so busy

 

Ria laughed at that and caressed her hair fondly.

 

Ria: Arjun called to tell that I have to attend one lunch party with him. Is it ok honey?

 

Geet: haan bhabhi, no problem. I’m totally fine. So go and enjoy

 

Ria: you sure

 

Geet: of course

 

Ria: fine then, I’m calling you brother

 

Saying so Ria left and Geet got busy in preparing her papa’s favorite dishes.

 

 

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Mohindar came to the dining hall for his lunch. Ria called him and told that she and Arjun were leaving for lunch with Arjun’s colleagues. So he knew that he had to complete his lunch alone as Geet would not eat with him.

 

But what made him surprised that Geet was sitting at the table and was putting foods on his plate.

 

Mohindar slightly avoided Geet and sat down on his chair. It’s been so many days that he didn’t see Geet’s one single glance.

 

Geet: I made your favorite foods papa

 

Geet said slowly

 

Mohindar: hmmmm

 

That’s what Geet got as a reply

 

The lunch was continuing silently, as both of them was totally unsure of what to say.

 

Geet: how’s the food papa?

 

Mohindar: it’s good

 

Geet: papa, can I talk with you about something?

 

Mohindar stopped eating and looked at her daughter

 

Though Geet was acting normal like nothing happened, the pale face and dark circles of under her eyes can visualize how she is living her life

 

But Mohindar’s past and fear of losing her only daughter came in his mind again, making him hard again

 

Mohindar: if it’s about Maan, then no use of it Geet. I already told you my decision. That boy is not right for you.

 

Geet: just talk with him for one time papa, please?

 

Mohindar: so that he can again tell some more lies and manage me to agree with his lies

 

Mohindar snapped making Geet more scared. No matter how much angry his papa used to be, he never showed that on her.

 

Geet: he is not a liar papa. And he is truly ashamed of his act. He was about to tell you all everything but his dad was in hospital. So he had to leave that day papa

 

Mohindar: I know what is right for you Geet. Don’t behave as if you know the world more than mine.

 

Geet: it’s not like that papa. Please at least one

 

Mohindar stood up without finishing his food

 

Mohindar: they all are same. Greedy and hungry for fame and money. And remember that I saw the world more than you all. And it will be good as soon as you forget that boy and move on in your life

 

Saying so mohindar started to leave, but Geet’s voice made him stop in middle

 

Geet: why you hate music and singers? Why this hate for Maan? He didn’t harm any of us nor did he have any intension to hurt us. Then why this hatred? And I love him papa. It’s not some doll in my hand that you will say to throw and in return will give me another. And I will completely forget about the previous doll.

 

Geet said from behind, trying hard to control the anger, frustration and pain.

 

Mohindar: you want to know? You want to know how your father faced the whole world turning against him only for the lust of money. They all are the same. My own brother betrayed me and stole my writing and songs. All those people who used to earn money by composing my music, selling my music, they all back stabbed me on my back just for some more money. I lost every small thing that I earned even my own house. I could not able to provide good treatments to your mother when you were nesting inside her. She fell down and I had to admit her when it’s only 7 months. Am I wrong to protect you all? Or wrong that I want to save you from these cruel people?

 

Geet cried to see the helplessness on her father’s eyes

 

Geet: papa I

 

Mohindar: you will not contact with that boy anymore. And you will listen to what I will say you to do. I will talk with Singhania and they will come with their son. If they will like you, I will go for this alliance. And it’s final Geet. I have had enough of your childishness.

 

Geet: it will never happen papa. If they were wrong that does not mean that Maan is also wrong. If they were lied for money, that does not mean that Maan will also lie for money. He does not run after money and I know him. I will not meet with anyone, forget about marrying someone else

 

Mohindar: you know what Geet? I was wrong. I was wrong to protect you both away from every cruel people. I was wrong to pamper you in everything as I never thought my daughter will stab me one day.

 

Geet: papa why don’t you understand that

 

Mohindar: I was wrong by accepting your mother’s decision when she told me to choose you over her. Or else I would never lose my wife over a daughter like you

 

Saying so Mohindar left. While Geet stood on the same place, totally shocked and numb. Mohindar’s every word meant nothing for her. But the very word that her mother died as they choose Geet to survive reached her ear. That only sentence only made sense and pierced her heart completely.